一座山，两条鱼-continuationwriting亲情类：亲情类：AdamAdam偷玩具车偷玩具车1.Read the story2.Predict the story3.Write the story目录Warming up Yellow&RedFrogWatch a video about two larvaslv（幼虫）（幼虫）and answer questions.Q1:Whats important for a story?Q2:Whats important for writing a story(/continuation writing)?characterplottheme（葛文山，2022）Lead inQ1:Whats important for a story?Q2:Whats important for writing a story(/continuation writing)?（衡很亨，2023）characterplotthemecharacterportraitplotdesignthemeexposition1Read the story 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Once there was a little boy called Adam who came from a rich family.He was a young student at primary school and was very clever.He always gained good marks in his exams.Adam got everything he wanted,such as toy cars,airplane models,water guns and so on.His parents bought him whatever he wanted.One day he went out to a store with his mother and in the toy section he found a very cool toy car.He was surprised to see that kind of toy car,so he ran to his mother and told her everything about it.Adam took his mother to the toy section to show how it worked.However,his mother refused to buy it for him because he already had a lot of toy cars.Adam was sad and wondered why his mother did not buy it for him.Two weeks later,Adam and his mother went to the same store again.Adam thought that his mother would buy it for him this time,so he asked his mother for the toy car again.His mother ignored him because she was looking for something else.But Adam really wanted the toy car.So,while his mother was busy looking for some other items,he took the toy car and put it inside his backpack.The salesman saw Adam stealing the toy car and tried to stop him.Adam tried to run but the salesman caught him.Adam started to cry.His mother heard his voice and ran to him.She was shocked to see the salesman holding her son.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按照如下格式在相应位置作答。“What happened?”she asked with concern._After they got home,Adam went to his room and regretted having done that._1.阅读全文，确定背景(Read for setting)A young and clever boy(Adam),Adams mother，the salesmanone day;two weeks later （过去时）in the store homeAdam lived in a rich family and gained good marks in exams.Adam got everything he wanted.time(When)place(Where)character（Who）background(What)setting 2.画故事山，构情节线和情感线(Read for plots and emotions)rising actionfalling actionendingplotsplotsbeginningemotionsemotionsclimaxMom what happened.Adams mom _ to buy the toy car.Two weeks later,his mother _ him again.Adam went to his room and having done that.Adam the toy car,tried to but the salesman him.Adam:sadAdam:desperateAdam:scared and criedcriedMom:concernedAdam:regrettedrefusedrefusedignoredignoredstolenstolenrunruncaughtcaughtaskedaskedregrettedregretted2Predict the story 3.根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)rising actionfalling actionendingplotsplotsbeginningMom asked what happened.Adams mom refused to buy the toy car.Two weeks later,his mother ignored him again.Adam stolen the toy car,tried to run but the salesman caught him.Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.emotionsemotionsclimax衔接句Adam:regrettedAdam:sadAdam:desperateAdam:scared and criedcriedMom:concerned主题句Paragraph 1:“What happened?”she asked with concern.Paragraph 2:After they got home,Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.衔接句1.Who answered?2.Before they got home,what did they do?1.What happened in the room?2.Why Adam regretted and how to show?3.What will Adam do next time?3.根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)主题句回应回应前文前文/点出主题点出主题偷东西是绝对错误的。Itsabsolutelywrongtostealthings.反思并承认错误，吸取教训。Reflectandadmitthemistake.Learnfromthelesson.该怎么做？-结合家庭实际，判断是需要还是想要？树立正确的金钱观。Wecantbuyanythingwewant,instead,weshouldbuysomethingwereallyneed.3.根据故事山，预测情节和主题(Predict the plots and theme)口诀：两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量口诀：两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量衔接句主题句After they got home,Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.“What happened?”she asked with concern.Step 1Step 1:Main Main contentscontents of Para 2 of Para 2 and and positive endingpositive ending.Step 2Step 2:Main Main contentscontents of Para 1.of Para 1.售货员回答事情经过，归还玩具。回家路上，母亲与儿子交流。“Lets go home and see how many toy cars you have already owned”.回家后，儿子主动承认错误，向母亲道歉，并从中得到教训。母亲原谅儿子。4.Draft for writingSalesman explainedreturned the toyMom asked whyMom was angryMom scoldedAdam replied“What happened?”she asked with concern.Para 1Para 1衔接句wanted the toy car desperatelyin detailsquicklywhy he did thatAdam lowered his head,in shameon the way back home,seriously一个角色一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色其他角色的一系列反应。ActionResponse主题句Adam reflectedMom forgivedAdam learnedAdam apologized Mom educatedAdams thoughtAfter they got home,Adam went to his room and regretted having done that.Para 2Para 2not to steal buy things:whether need it or want itthink why didtold not to do againfor stealingit is not right一个角色一个角色的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色其他角色的一系列反应。4.Draft for writingActionResponse3Write the story 评分标准参考Tips for writing口诀：人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变口诀：人物时态和事件，语言特色不要变Tip 1:58Tip 1:58细节添加法细节添加法Tip 2:Tip 2:To