名师教你英语作文得满分技巧三 段 式 作 文所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。三段式的模式写法通常为：1第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间、地点、人物和主要事情及时点出。2第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。3最后一段，得出结论或理由。注意：要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次不明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有：1. 递进型：besides，whats more，worse still，moreover，even，furthermore等；2.解释型：that is (to say)，in other words，or等；3.转折型：however，but，yet，although，otherwise，instead，on the contrary等；4.列举型：firstly.secondly(and then).thirdly(next)finally，on one hand，on the other hand等；5.举例型：for example，for instance，such as，that is，like，take.for example等；6.因果型：because (of)，since，therefore，as a result，thanks to，thus，due to等；7.让步型：though，although，in spite of，despite等；8.顺序型：first.next.and then.finally，first.then.after that.finally等；9.并列型：and，or，also，as well as等；10.时间型：afterwards，soon，later，the moment，hardly.when.，no sooner.than.等；11.总结型：in conclusion，in a word，to sum up，in short，on the whole等；12.见解型：in my opinion，personally speaking，as far as I am concerned等。以上写作模式可时常运用于实际的写作过程中，只要我们把握好写作技巧和模式，书面表达能力的提高也就指日可待了。写作举例：假设你是李越，你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说，他和他的一些同学正在学中文，请你推荐两本学中文的词典。根据下表提供的信息，请你给他写一封回信。英汉词典新华字典收词(字)18000 (英语)20000 (汉语)10000价格52元11元特点大量例子、用法说明，适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典注意：1.词数：100左右；2参考词汇：推荐recommend；英汉词典The EnglishChinese Dictionary (ECD)；新华字典Xinhua Dictionary (XD)。开头：Dear Steve，YYours， Li Yue分析:此篇书面表达属于实物说明文，其篇章结构可按三段式进行写作。本文的第一段，可用直接的叙述，说收到来信、知道对方的事情。正文作为第二段，主要内容是对两本词典的介绍。结束语作为第三段。写作时要注意文章的基本时态用一般现在时，将两本词典的特点表达准确，以便加拿大笔友Steve做出合理选择。高分范文Dear Steve，(第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间、地点、人物和主要事情及时点出。)Im so pleased to receive your letter and learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.(第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。)Id like to recommend the following two dictionaries. The EnglishChinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples，it has many notes telling you how to use a word. Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary，and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two，ECD is more expensive. It costs 52 yuan，and XD costs 11 yuan.(最后一段，得出结论或理由。)I think the above two are suitable to you. Please let me know if you want me to buy them for you.Yours，Li Yue针对训练当前，越来越多的中学生利用周末时间参加各种培训班或请家教。对于这种现象，存在两种不同的观点。有些人认为有必要另一些人认为没有必要1.跟老师学比自学好2.可以巩固课堂所学3.可以学到更多知识1.容易养成依赖的习惯2.学生需要时间休息3.都以赢利为目的请根据内容提示写一篇短文，并简要阐述自己的观点。注意：1.文章题目和开头已为你写好；2为使行文连贯，可适当增加细节；3词数：100左右。文章题目：Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?文章开头More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekends. 【参考答案】Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?(第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间、地点、人物和主要事情及时点出。)More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekends. There are two different viewpoints about it.(第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。)Some think it necessary. First of all，its more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly，it can strengthen what they have learnt in class. Besides，they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing，students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another，students need time to relax from time to time. Whats more，the purpose of many training classes and family teachers is to make money.(最后一段，得出结论或理由。)In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. Do be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste of time and money. 选修六Unit3同步写作训练在班内，同学们就“青少年是否该吸烟”展开了讨论。讨论结果如下：人数观点理由80%反对危害身体健康；一旦成瘾，很难戒除；影响他人健康等。20%赞成可以缓解学习压力；一种时尚，感觉很酷请根据表格写一篇短文，并表明自己的观点。要求：1.字数120左右。 2.根据提示可适当扩展，但要保持流畅连贯。范文： Recently, we had a discussion about whether adolescents should smoke cigarettes. We have two different viewpoints about it On one hand, about 20% of the students agree that adolescents smoke cigarettes. In their opinion, smoking can help them ease their pressure from lessons. Besides, smoking is fashionable and it feels cool to smoke in front of other peers. However, on the other hand , about 80% object to it. They think smoking does great damage to their bodies; Once they are addicted to it, itll be rough to quit it. Whats more, smoking also has a harmful effect on others, non-smokers in particular. More importantly, if you are a heavy smoker, youll smell terrible. Thats why sometimes you find it difficult to communicate with others. As far as Im concerned, adolescents should not get into the bad habit of smoking. Thats because it does no good to our physical and mental health in the long term.