如何让英语作文靓起来一、 状语提前所谓状语提前就是把副词、介词、现在分词或者动词不定式组成的小语段放在句首，对前置部分起到强调作用，而使用这种语法最大的好处是让你的句子有一个长短相合的节奏感。每篇文章中出现两、三处这样的亮点，会让阅卷老师感到心旷神怡，是一种很拿分的策略。1. 副词及短语作状语，常用的词有fortunately/unfortunately, personally, perhaps, instead, similarly, overall, in particular 等。 They will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger instead. Instead, they will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger.I personally think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of stars.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of stars. I want to in particular sell my big dining table.In particular I want to sell my big dinning table.2. 介词及介词短语作状语， 常用的词和短语有besides, in addiction to , apart from, in terms of , despite , as a result of, in spite of 等The largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes throughout the country. Throughout the country , the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes.3. 现在分词短语作状语， 这里有一个额外提醒， 即一定要保持句子的主语和分词逻辑主语的一致性。I bear in mind the circumstances and trust you will kindly waive any fines that may have accumulated.Bear in mind the circumstances, I trust you will kindly waive any fines that may have accumulated.4. 动词不定式作状语，表目的。The government should encourage people to avoid going out at rush hour to alleviate traffic jams.To alleviate traffic jams, the government should encourage people to avoid going out at rush hour二、插入语 插入语是一种独立成分，一般与句中的其他成分没有语法上的关系，大多是对一句话进行的附加说明或解释，常由一个词、一个短语或一个句子构成，常置于句中或句末，一般用逗号与句子隔开。插入语是一种地道的英语表达方式，可以让单调的句子富于变化，而且更有跳跃性，活泼却不失严谨。There is , however, another possible way of defining that part of the quotation.1. 凡是表示个人观点或态度的时候，都可以用介词短语，不定式以及主谓结构作插入成分。Of crucial importance, in my opinion, is how we define “responsible for bringing the children up”.Well, I just got so fed up with it I was working really long hours and, to be honest, the pay wasnt great. Hell work only during daytime hours, so you wont be disturbed in the evening again, I promise.2. 凡是表示时间的时候，都可以用介词作插入语。That is why, in recent years, there has been a growing body of opinion in favor of putting more resources into health education and preventive measures.3.凡是表示列举的时候，也可以用介词作插入结构。Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life.4.凡是表示补充说明的时候，都可以用现在分词和分词短语作插入语The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980.此外，要补充一点，除了“四个凡是”，类似于这样的副词，however, though, indeed, admittedly等也是可以用作插入语的。三、倒装 倒装结构是恰当使用也是可以让文章出彩的，主要是起强调作用，转换语气，是考试中很让考官眼前一亮的好句子。（如何倒装请参考语法的倒装部分）如:Next came central heating ownership, rising from 37% of household in 1972 to 64% in 1983.Another country, Italy, comes close only in the case of tennis racquets.Only in the case of tennis racquets does another country, Italy, comes close. So difficult was the situation that the government decided to take measures to alleviate it.Try as they might, these children still dont obtain good education.四、强调 为了突出某个单词、词组或句子，就要用到强调，常用形式It is/was .that/who。这是考官比较心仪的一种结构，与前面带有强调作用的语法相比，它突出强调的意味更浓，使阅读的人把重心全放在你想强调的那一部分上，所以这种结构不仅能创造出多样化的句式，而且还可以传达出丰富的内涵。It is this second, fuller, concept of “fatherhood”that I am in favor of , although I also realize how difficult it is to achieve sometimes.It was not until she went abroad that she knew the truth of the fact.五、虚拟语气 虚拟语气把动作当作一种只存在于讲话人想象中的“假设”或“推测”，而不是当作客观现实中的真实事件，可以传达出怀疑、忧虑、推测、假设、想象或祝愿等含义。与一般意义上的过去时，现在时和将来时不同，虚拟语气可谓是“绅士”级别的用法，也是对语言能力比较高的要求。因为它通过谓语动词的特殊形式，显示出语气的弱化，表现形式更加准确、细腻。虚拟语气常出现在表示条件或结果的句子中，分别能反映与现在事实相反、与过去事实相反、与将来事实可能相反的情况。If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person from the moment they were born.They have the demand that the library (should) be open even on Sunday.It is necessary that some immediate effort （should） be made.六、被动语态当不需要强调动作的执行者时，被动语态是一个不错的选择，它可以用来错开句式，让你的作文从一味地用人作主语开头的模式中跳跃出来，使文章的句式错落有致。1. 主动变被动不需要体现动作的执行者, 因而使用被动语态将会使表达更贴切。 We should advise people to protect their own interests and not to be led astray by false advertisements.People should be advised to protect their own interests and not to be led astray by false advertisements.需要强调动作的陈述者，如下列句中是“Mr. Li”被选为主席，就应该使用被动语态The employees elected Mr. Li chairman of the committee last week.Mr. Li was elected chairman of the committee by the employees last week.保持陈述对象的一致性，以求行文通顺Computer may help scientists in analyzing data and doing complex calculation, while engineers make use of some computers in designing a plane, or a spaceship.Computer may help scientists in analyzing data and doing complex calculation, while some computers are made use of by engineers in designing a plane, or a spaceship.七、逻辑衔接词1. 表示时间次序的衔接词 首先：first, firstly, in the first place 其次：second, secondly, in the s