名师整体分析如何备考2010年6月英语四级写作各位同学，今天和大家一起聊一聊大学英语四级写作，就以刚刚考过的2009年12月的四级考试作文题为例。12月四级写作的题目是creating a green campus.。整体思路依然延续了以前的风格，同样给出了比较详细的提纲：1.建设绿色校园很重要。2.绿色校园不仅是绿色的环境 3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该一篇写作文章，整体来说主要包括以下几部分：单词、短语、句型以及整体的文章思路和结构。我们现在来整体分析一下。首先是单词的角度，根据我这几年的教学经验，我发现学生们主要的问题是能写出词汇，但是自己的词汇比较简单，更多像是口语而并不是书面语。我们都知道英文词汇是非常丰富的，一些源于拉丁文，希腊文和法文的长词，多用于正式文体，而一些源于古英语的词汇一般比较短小，多用于非正式文体。首先给大家一些例子，大家可以分析一下，比如：purchase & buy, utilize & use, punctuation & on time, investigate & look into. 我们可以通过以上例子看出&前面的单词比后面的单词更加适合于写作。针对于环境问题，我们可以应用以下的单词以提高整体单词的书面性以及书面语的可用性，degradation降解;sewage 污水; waste liquid 废液;destruction of vegetation 植被的丧失;harmful gases 有害气体;take the main blame for 负主要责任。其次我们考虑句子主要考虑一下几方面：1. 长短句结合2. 倒装句3. 非谓语动词。长短句结合的应用是非常重要的，现在给大家举一个例子：原句是 I love books. I want to read every one of them. Search the knowledge is my life. Its what I do best. 这句话就是短句的经典例子。这句话可以转化成I love books. Even I want to read every one of them for the simple reason that searching the knowledge is my life and reading is what I do best. 优化后的句子使用了一个短句和一个长句。第一句起概括作用，第二句起解释说明作用。使人能够分清主次，印象深刻。倒装句也是写作的一种常用手段，出于修辞的考虑，将句子成分前后倒置，这种现象叫做倒装，倒装句可以强调、突出被倒装的部分，达到较强的修辞效果，给读者留下深刻的印象，比如：Only in this way can you succeed in the end. Only in this way can we put an end to the pollution等。非谓语动词主要包括不定式、动名词和分词。使用非谓语动词可以使句子更加的紧凑，而且逻辑严谨。比如：Looking into the future, we will try our best to solve all the following issues. 以及Considering all these, I believe we really have a bright future.从句子的角度考虑，我们主要可以采用一些非常经典的结构，描述环境现象的如：Scientists have warned that unless effective solutions are worked out, the problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand. 科学家们警告说如果不采取有效地措施，污染问题最终会失去控制。Beside, trees and lawns in our cities will in the long run help improve the local climate. 此外，从长远角度看我们城市中的绿树和草坪有助于改善当地的气候。Widespread deforestation results in the increase of global temperature and unpleasant change of climate. 大面积的砍伐森林导致全球气温的升高和异常的气候变化。描述解决方案的如：Both government and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for our future generations. 不论是政府还是普通市民，都应携起手来共同使我们的环境变得更美好，不但是为我们自己着想，而且是为了我们的子孙后代。Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. 已经采取法律措施来控制空气污染，保护森林和海水资源以及阻止任何环境污染。Scientists are working hard to find ways to keep the earth clean. 科学家们正致力于找到保持地球清洁的办法。Great efforts should be made to improve our environment such as planting more trees, controlling the exploration of underground water and so on.我们应该下大力改善环境，例如大面积植树、控制开采地下水资源等等。With the rapid development of science and technology, the environment will be improved sooner or later. 随着科学技术的迅猛发展，总有一天环境会得到改善。 2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作训练题(1) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the university president. You should write at least 120 words based on the outline given below in Chinese:1. 学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的培养。2. 学校应该丰富学生的校园生活【范文】A Letter to the University PresidentDear Sir,I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning our teaching and campus life.As a sophomore from the Math Department, I am quite satisfied with the present condition of my university, but Id like to say that there is still some room for improvement.First, I believe that more attention should be paid to the guidance of our study methods. To some extent, university students are capable of studying by themselves, but more often than never, we find ourselves at a loss as to choose good books to read and appropriate topics for our research. It is clear that we need some advice from our teachers. If our teachers can lecture more on “how to learn by yourself” for us, especially for the freshmen, our skills will be further improved.Second, more activities should be conducted to make our campus life more colorful. Im sorry to say that the present life on campus is quite boring. Every day we have classes, read in the library, or stay in the dormitory. Life here is routine. We need more meaningful activities organized to enrich our college life and enable us to study more efficiently.I hope you can consider my suggestions. Thank you. Yours sincerely Li Ming2010年6月大学英语四六级考试写作训练题(2) 写作热门话题分析1.校园生活part-time job 兼职工作 economic burden经济负担working experience 工作经历 competition and cooperation竞争与合作tuition学费 course arrangement 课程安排extracurricular activities课外活动 distance education远程教育required coursecompulsory course必修课 take an examinationsit an examination 参加考试live outside campus 住在校外 food services饮食application form 申请表 withdrawdraw cash 取钱instructor 辅导老师 student union 学生会undergraduate 本科生 postgraduate研究生credit学分 degrees学位经典句式： In recent years, studying abroad has become a new craze among college students.如今，留学在大学生中成为一种新的热潮。