第四讲日记第三章记叙文写作日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中，人们会对事件发表评论，阐述自己的态度或体会。1英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。其具体格式为：英文日记的书端是专门写日记的日期和星期的。左上角是日期(日、月、年)、星期。2日记的时态：由于日记是对当天所发生事情的回顾，因此常用一般过去时。在发表评论或感想时，也可使用其他时态。3日记的人称：因为日记是记载自己的亲身经历，因此应用第一人称，语言尽量口语化，按照事情发生的先后顺序，清楚、准确、连贯地把事情表达出来。4日记的具体写作结构为：1吸引眼球开头句This morning,when I was walking on the street,I saw that two travelers were reading a map,looking puzzled.今天早上，当我在街上散步的时候，我看到两个旅行者在看地图，看起来很困惑。It is Sunday today.This morning,we had a voluntary activity.今天是星期天。早晨，我们有个志愿活动。2亮点出彩篇中句I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take No.20 Bus,which could take them there directly.我把他们带到附近的公共汽车站，建议他们乘坐20路公共汽车，这样他们就可以直接到那里了。Seeing them on the bus,I felt a kind of satisfaction.看到他们在公共汽车上，我感到一种满足。Today I successfully got rid of my phone and I felt it amazing.今天我成功地摆脱了我的手机，我觉得很神奇。It offered me an opportunity to get close to nature and have a good chat with my friends instead of chatting online.它给了我一个接近自然并和我的朋友聊天的机会，而不是在网上聊天。3韵味无穷结尾句A thrilling as well as meaningful day has ended,but I still remained excited for quite a long time.劳累而有意义的一天结束了，但我仍然激动了很长一段时间。What happened today has left a deep impression in my memory.今天发生的事在我的脑海里留下了深刻的印象。What an unforgettable experience!多么令人难忘的一次经历！This is the lesson we should learn from.这是我们应当汲取的教训。Though tired,I felt very happy.虽然很累，但我感觉很快乐。星期_ 日、月(日期)Everyone may have experienced something unforgettable,good or bad.I will never forget the thing that _(事情)(提出将要讲述的事情)It was_(时间)On the way,I found _(人物)I went upward and knew that _(事情发展)I thought _(帮助对方)However,to my surprise,I _(遇到挫折)At last I _(结果)(详细讲述事情发生的时间、地点和过程等)This is only a small thing,but only at that moment did I know_(感受)(发表见解或感想)假定你是李华，昨天你参加了学校举办的以“我最喜欢的一本书”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记，要点如下：1描述当时比赛的情况；2你的表现和感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。Saturday4 June【满分范文】Saturday 4 JuneThis afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school，whose topic is“The book I like best”When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well,I felt a little worried.At the thought of the words“I can do it”，I became calm a lot.Soon it was my turn.When I said“The book I like best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller;from the book,I realize that it would be an excellent rule to live happily each day as if we should die tomorrow.”，my teachers and classmates cheered for me.Finally I won first prize.Be happy every day and try my best to do everything.Ill keep it in my mind and make it come true.【名师点评】1文章开篇总体描述；随后详述当时的比赛情况；最后阐述自己的感想。2范文中使用了大量高级句式结构，如whose引导的定语从句(whose topic is“The book I like best”)，when引导的时间状语从句(When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well)，as if引导的方式状语从句(as if we should die tomorrow)，过去分词短语(written by Helen Keller)作后置定语；还使用了(at the thought of,keep it in my mind等)高级词汇，使得文章语言多样，条理清楚，层次分明。这些都彰显了作者扎实的英语语言功底，较强的思维能力和表达能力。假定你是李华，上周六下午你校在学校礼堂举行了消防逃生演练(fire drill)。请你写一篇英语日记记录这一事件，内容包括：1消防讲座；2逃生演练；3你的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。Saturday26 February【参考范文】Saturday 26 FebruaryIn order to raise our safety awareness,some firefighters were invited to our school to give a speech last Saturday afternoon.They showed us what to do in case of a fire,how to prevent the fire and how to use different kinds of fire-fighting equipment.Then a fire drill was held.As soon as the alarm rang,all of us students ran downstairs one by one.We finally got together at the playground safely;our teachers were waiting for us.Through the drill,we have learned how to escape in an emergency.I think it is important for us to remain calm and know what to do.