单元话题写作 M1U5 Nelson Mandela a modern hero 【写作指南：人物描写 = 概 + 貌 + 育 + 平 + 估】1.概况age, sex, birth-place, background2.外貌性格appearance ,character3.教育：education 4.生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )5.评估evaluation【实例展示】World Youth (monthly) 有一“人物”专栏，刊登各国青年人物的图片。你校校友王小平的照片被采用。请根据以下资料写一段说明，以便随图发表。词数100左右。姓名：王小平; 国籍：中国; 出生年月：1966年2月; 职业：计算机高级工程师1984年7月毕业于西安四中，同年进入西安交通大学学习。1989年起在西安的一家计算机公司工作。1993年获计算机博士学位；一家美国公司欲高薪聘用，但被他拒绝；1998年因特殊贡献获金奖。参考范文：Wang Xiaoping，born in China in February,1966，is a senior engineer of a famous computer company in China , who was given a gold medal in 1998 for having played an important part in scientific research.In 1989，he went to work in a computer company in Xian. Five years after having Graduated from Xian Jiaotong University，he received a doctors degree of computer. Once an American company tried to invite him to work in America and promised him a high salary. But he refused. Now he still works hard for his motherland.【实战演练】假如你是班长，根据下列提示写一篇人物介绍，向即将到来的一个美国交换生Mike介绍你的化学老师 Hanson。要点如下：1 50岁左右，又高又瘦，戴着一副眼镜；2. 毕业于四川大学， 从教30余年；3教学认真负责，课堂生动有趣；4关爱学生，深受学生爱戴。【基础短句】1. Hanson 是我们的化学老师，五十多岁。（同位语表达） 2. 又高又瘦，戴着一副眼镜。（分词做状语） 3. 自从他1985年毕业于四川大学以来，就一直在我们学校教化学。 4. 他在教学上有很多好方法。 5. 我认为他天生就是当老师的。 6. 为了提高我们的分数，他经常备课到深夜，并努力使他的课堂生动。(late into the night) 7. 他的课是如此的有趣，以至于你绝不会感到无聊。 8.他投入空闲时间来帮助化学学习有困难的学生。（定语从句）(devote) 9. 这使我在过去两年里取得很大进步。 10. 他不仅在学习上严格要求我们，还很关心我们。 11. 他经常主动帮助有困难的学生。（in trouble） 12. 每次我们在生活中陷入麻烦，他就是那个我们会求助的人。（名词短语做连词，定语从句） 13. 他对教学的投入，以及他的善良 使得他深受学生的欢迎。 【提分长句】1. 用分词结构，同位语从句把4,5句合起来。 2. 用倒装结构改写第7句。 3. 用分词结构把8,9句合起来。 4. 用倒装结构改写第10句。 5. 用强调句型改写第13句。 【巧妙衔接】选用in a word, Whats more; therefore;等过渡词衔接成文。Our Chemistry TeacherHansonHanson, our Chemistry teacher, is about fifty years old. He is a tall and thin person, wearing a pair of glasses.He has been teaching Chemistry in our school since he graduated from the Sichuan University in 1985. I think Hanson is a natural teacher based on the fact that he has a lot of good methods on teaching. In order to improve our grades, he often prepares lessons late into the night and tries his best to make his classes lively. So interesting are his classes that you will never feel bored. Whats more, he devoted his spare time to helping students who have trouble in learning Chemistry，thus contributing to my great progress in the last two years. Not only is he strict with us on study, but also he shows great concern for us. He often offers to help out the students in trouble. Therefore, the moment we get into trouble in life, he is the very person to whom we will turn for help. In a word, it is his devotion to teaching as well as his kindness that leads to his popularity with his students. We all love and respect him.