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高三新题型读后续写不同主题总结和练习-冒险类板块一-例文欣赏(出海捕鱼遇险)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was the first time that my father had asked me to help him.By the time we finished,herring(鲱鱼) covered the bottom of the boat as deep as my knees.For the first time in days,my father seemed happy.Then he looked at the western sky,and his smile disappeared.They are called Northwesters.Theyre storms that sweep out of Canada hard and fast.No one can predict their arrival.All fishermen fear them.“Were going back,” my father said.He started the motor.We were only two miles out, but the shore looked to me to be as far away as the moon.Over the distant hills,black clouds ran toward us like wild horses.My father set a course directly for them.We made it only halfway home before we met the storm.The wind came first.It lifted the lake in whitecaps.The weight of the herring made us ride low in the water, and the waves broke over our bow(船头)By the time the rain came,wed put more distance behind us.Although we were now only half a mile from shore, the rain fell so hard that we couldnt see the land.I was scared,but I saw my father sitting straight in the stern(船尾),holding the boat steady into the wind, and I felt hopeful.I was starting to think we were going to make it.Thats when the motor died.My father tried many times to restart it, but failed.I saw that the boat was coming about.I knew what that meant.We would sink in no time.“Grab an oar(浆),” he shouted above the wind.We set the oars in the locks and began to pull hard.My father dug his oar into the water, brought the boat around, and bowed into the wind again.With all my strength,I pulled on my own oar.The wind pushed hard against us.We seemed to be fighting the anger of the whole lake.注意:续写词数应为150左右。I was tired. My mother rushed through the rain to greet us. 一、故事梗概二、情节推断根据已经给出的续写部分每段的开头语并展开合理想象可推断:1第一段开头是:我很累。所以接下来应该描述作者在疲惫不堪的情况下如何奋力地划桨靠岸,成功脱险的过程。2第二段开头是:妈妈冒雨前来迎接儿子和丈夫。所以本段应该写父子俩奋力脱险回到岸上以后的事情,着重描写一家人团聚时互相安慰和激动的心情。可根据自己的想象构建故事情节。续写两段的四要素如下:Paragraph 1Paragraph 2时间:When I was tired地点: only half a mile from the shore人物:father and the son事件:how they managed to get onto the shore in the horrible storm.时间:After pulling the boat into the shelter.地点:on the shore人物: mum, dad and the son事件:they hugged together and the father praised his son.三、要素串联将已确定的四要素串联,并增加细节描写,完成读后续写。参考范文I was tired.My arms were really heavy and I felt as if they were on fire.We were made up and down by the waves.I didnt know how much longer I could pull that oar through the water.As if he heard my thinking,my father called to me, “I need you, Karl.Only a little longer.” So I kept pulling.Just when I thought I had no more strength, I heard itthe sound of waves breaking against the shore.It refreshed us greatly and we kept pulling.At last we moved into the shelter with all the herring.My mother rushed through the rain to greet us.“I have been so worried, ” she said.She hugged me tightly and then my father.“Nothing to worry about, ”he assured her.He put his hand on my shoulder,“You did well, son.How do you feel?” Tired as I was, I managed a smile.“Fine.And Daddy,you are a hero.”板块二-能力提升训练阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was the hottest time of the year in southern California.Steve,a star basketball player at the University of California,with his cousin Zach,had planned a camping trip in the Great National Forest for their summer vacation.The boys gathered clothes and supplies,and began their great adventure with Brady the dog early in the morning.Upon arrival,Steve pulled over to the side of the road along the bank of the river.“A wonderful place for fishing,” Steve exclaimed in delight.Zach nodded in agreement.At high noon,the sun was scorching hot.With a good harvest of fish,the boys marched into the forest with Brady following them.After a long walk,they found a clearing that was ideal for a campsite.The camp was set up immediately as Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper.An afternoon nap was absolutely a special treat in midsummer.However,the boys were waken up by the fierce barks of Brady.Outside,heavy smoke filled the air and windblown flame was skipping from the top of one tree to another.The long dry summer turned the forest into a tinderbox.In a little while,Steve and Zach were inside their tent packing their belongings.“Lets go! We can make it back to the river!” They headed down against the firewind in the direction of the river.But Brady barked a sharp warning.Ahead of them lay a
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