书面表达话题写作（八）学习提高篇【话题点睛】针对的话题主要关于课堂学习方式与方法、课堂学习情况的评价、课外学习与提升等方面。主要涉及描述学校学习情况、帮助同学解决学习问题、通过阅读或其他方式进行自我提升等方面。典例分析随着中华诗词大会和朗读者的开播,全国上下再一次掀起了阅读的热潮,请以“LetsReadMore!”为题,参照下表写一篇短文。内容包括:阅读的重要性、阅读的好处、阻碍阅读的原因以及在阅读方面的建议。LetsReadMore!TheimportanceofreadingGetknowledgeTheadvantagesofreadingOpenupoureyes;Thereasonswhyyoureadlessmanyactivitiestakeupmuchtime,suchusSuggestionsonreading写作要求(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;(2)所写内容必须包括图表中所提供的信息,并适当发挥;(3)词数:不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数);(4)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。参考词汇getknowledge,makeuscleverandhappy,encouragetoLetsReadMore!Readingisveryimportantinourdailylives._【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是号召大家阅读,结合参考词汇,写作内容可以从以下几方面展开:(1)开门见山,指出阅读的重要性,号召多读书;(2)具体阐述阅读在学习和生活方面给我们带来的好处;(3)拓展造成阅读少的原因,并提出克服的建议。2.确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称:第一人称【写作架构】【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我们可以通过阅读许多好书来获取知识。(bydoingsth.)Wecangetknowledge.2.阅读也有助于我们更好地成长。(helpsb.dosth.)Readingalso.3.许多活动占用了我们大部分的阅读时间。(takeup)Manyactivitiesourreadingtime.4.我想建议大家都要读一些好书。(wouldliketodosth.)Ithateveryoneshouldreadsomegoodbooks.byreadingalotofgoodbookshelpsusgrowupbettertakeupmuchofwouldliketosuggest.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)1.Itcanopenoureyes.Itmakesuscleverandhappy.(用notonlybutalso合并为一个句子)2.Ourstudycanbeimproved.Wereadmoreimportantbooks.(用if改写为条件状语从句)3.RegardingtheInternetasagoodhelperinourstudyisbetter.(改为it作形式主语的句子)Itcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsomakeuscleverandhappy.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifwereadmoreimportantbooks.ItsbettertoregardtheInternetasagoodhelperinourstudy.【连句成文】LetsReadMore!Readingisveryimportantinourdailylives.Wecangetknowledgebyreadingalotofgoodbooks.Itcannotonlyopenupoureyesbutalsomakeuscleverandhappy.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifwereadmorebooks.Readingalsohelpsusgrowupbetter.However,manyactivitiestakeupmuchofourreadingtime,suchaslisteningtomusic,watchingTVandsurfingtheInternet.Whatapity!SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadsomegoodbooks.Theywillbeveryhelpfultous!Letsstartreadingnow!拓展积累【相关短语】behelpfulto有助于;asmuchaspossible尽可能多地;beafraidof害怕;makemistakes犯错误;makegooduseof充分利用;openoneseyes开阔眼界;haveachancetodosth.有机会做某事;tryonesbesttodosth.尽某人最大努力做某事【参考谚语】1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。2.Nopain,nogain.没有付出就没有收获。3.Geniusisnothingbutlaboranddiligence.天才不过是勤奋而已。4.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。5.Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老,学到老。【亮点句型】学习方法1.Wecangetknowledgebyreadingalotofgoodbooks.2.ImwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.3.ItishelpfultoreadsomegoodChinesenewspapersandmagazines.4.TrytospeakChineseasmuchaspossibleanddontbeafraidofmakingmistakes.5.Wedbettermakegooduseoftime.学习体验1.Itcannotonlyopenoureyesbutalsomakeuscleverandhappy.2.Readingalsohelpsusgrowupbetter.3.Inthiswayyourreadingabilitycanbeimproved.4.Themoreyouspeak,thebetteryourspokenChinesewillbe.5.Notonlycantheyhelpdevelopourabilityofindependentstudy,butalsowecanhavemorechancestoshowourselves.实战演练A2018泰州改编假设你是李华,你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查,并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按下表提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。ItemsContentsyourthoughtsaboutEnglish1.themostwidelyusedlanguageintheworld;yourEnglishlevelatpresent1.communicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishsimply;2.wontheprizeinthespeechcontestlastyear;yourproblemswithlearningEnglish1.cantusethegrammarrulescorrectly;yoursuggestionsforEnglishteaching要求(1)词数:不少于80。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,并作适当发挥;(3)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。IamLiHua._Iwishourschoolwillconsidermyadvice.Onepossibleversion:IamLiHua.HerearemythoughtsaboutEnglish.Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheworld.Itcanhelpusnotonlyunderstanddifferentculturesintheworldbutimproveourcommunicationskills.AndspeakingmoreEnglishcanimproveourconfidence.Atpresent,IcancommunicatewithmyclassmatesinEnglishsimply.Ialsolikespeeches.Iwontheprizeinthespeechcontestlastyear.AndIbelieveIshouldbeabletotalkwithotherscorrectlywhenIgotoaWesterncountry.However,IhavesomeproblemswithlearningEnglish.Icantusethegrammarrulescorrectly.SometimesIcantexpressmyselfclearlyinwriting.Ioftenfindithardtoremembermoredifficultwords.IsuggestteachersshouldcommunicatemorewithusinEnglishandencourageusmoreandintroducemoregoodEnglishbookstous.Iwishourschoolwillconsidermyadvice.B2015衢州改编最近,部分学校开设了一些特色课(specialclasses),诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等,你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见,以下是你们班同学的观点和理由,请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文,发表在校园网的英语论坛上。OpinionsReasonsNecessaryDevelopinterests,improvelifeskillsUnnecessaryAwasteoftime,nothelpfulforlessonsYouropinionsandreasons要求(1)文章应包括表格中的信息,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;(3)词数:不少于80;(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。短文首句:Recentlysomeschoolsoffertheirstudentssomespecialclasses,suchascookingclasses,handicraftclasses,traditionaloperaclassesandsoon._Onepossibleversion:Recentlysomeschoolsoffertheirstudentssomespecialclasses,suchascookingclasses,handicraftclasses,traditionaloperaclassesandsoon.Isitnecessarytooffertheseclasses?Wehadadiscussioninourclass.Somestudentsthinkitsreallynecessarytodoit.First,itsgoodforstudentstodeveloptheirinterests.Andinterestscanmakethemmoreknowledgeable.Second,theseclassesarehelpfulforthemtoimprovetheirlifeskills.Theseskillsareusefulforyoungstudents.However,othershavedifferentopinions.Theydontthinkitssonecessary.Theythinkitsawasteoftimeanditsnothelpfulfortheirlessons.Inmyopinion,itsagoodideatooffertheseclasses.Theyarenotonlygoodforourstudybutalsoforourgrowing.