CHARACTER WRITING人物写作基础写作指导基础写作指导George Bernard Shawa famous playwright1.他是一位著名的剧作家，于1856年出生于爱尔兰的都柏林；2.他的第一部戏剧鳏夫的房产（Widowers House）创作于1892年；3. 卖花女（Pygmalion）是他最著名的戏剧之一，此剧的电影剧本使他获得2.了奥斯卡奖；3.4. 1925年他荣获诺贝尔文学奖， 他是唯一一个4.荣获奥斯卡奖和诺贝尔奖的人；5. 1950年，他逝世于英国家中，享年94；学生作品鉴赏学生作品鉴赏(梁晓燕)thein THE MAGICAL WANDS (魔法棒) OF CHARACTER WRITING1.the infinite verbs（非谓语）（非谓语）2.with结构结构3.clauses (the attributive clause, the object clause)4.同位语同位语(appositive)5.固定句式固定句式(fixed sentences)同位语同位语APPOSITIVE1.徐悲鸿是一位著名的画家，他从徐悲鸿是一位著名的画家，他从9岁起开始从父学岁起开始从父学画。画。Xu Beihong is a famous painter. He began to learn drawing from his father at the age of 9.2. 博尔特是一位著名的运动员，他于博尔特是一位著名的运动员，他于1986年年8月月21日日出生在牙买加出生在牙买加(Jamaica).Usain Bolt is a famous athlete. He was born on August 21st,1986 in Jamaica.Xu Beihong, a famous painter, began to learn drawing from his father at the age of 9.Usain Bolt, a famous athlete, was born on August 21st,1986 in Jamaica.Practice1.The Mid-Autumn Day falls on the fifteenth day of August of the lunar calendar every year. It is a traditional festival with a long history in China.The Mid-Autumn day,_,falls on the fifteenth day of August of the lunar calendar every year. a traditional festival with a longhistory in ChinaPractice2. The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first lunar month every year. It is the most energetic and traditional festival in China.The Spring Festival,_, falls on the first day of the first lunar month every year.the most energetic and traditionalfestival in ChinaWITH 结构我的历史老师是一位漂亮的女人，长着一头长发和一对大眼睛。 My history teacher is a beautiful woman. She has long hair andbig eyes.My history teacher is a beautifulwoman, with long hair and big eyes.Practice1.这是一个漂亮小女孩，长着一对智慧的眼睛和长长的浓密的睫毛。This is a beautiful child,_and_.2.这个罪犯是看起来很老，宽宽的下巴，额头上还有一道疤痕。This criminal appeared to be old, _and_.3. 在我眼里，科比是最棒的篮球员，长着强壮的肌肉。In my eyes, Colby is the best basketball player with strong muscles.with a pair of intelligent eyeslong and thick eyelasheswith a square jawa scar on his forehead从句从句定语从句（定语从句（THE ATTRIBUTIVE CLAUSE）1.他是世界跳水冠军他是世界跳水冠军(champion)，出生于，出生于1986年年8月月21日。日。Bolt was a world champion in diving He was born on August 21, 1986.2. 刘翔是刘翔是110米跨栏米跨栏(110-meter hurdle)的世界冠军，的世界冠军，1.身高身高1.89米，体重米，体重87公斤。公斤。Liu Xiang is a world champion in the 110-meter hurdle .Liu Xiang is 1.89 meters tall and 87 kg in weight. Step one 找相同的名词性的成分找相同的名词性的成分Bolt was a world champion in diving He was born on August 21, 1986.Step Two 确定被修饰成分确定被修饰成分Bolt he was born on August 21, 1986 was a worldchampion in diving.Step Three 将从句中的相同成分去掉，用关系词将从句中的相同成分去掉，用关系词 代替代替Bolt was born on August 21, 1986 was a world champion in diving.whoLiu Xiang is a world champion in the 110-meter hurdle .Liu Xiang is 1.89 meters tall and 87 kg in weight. Liu Xiang who is a world champion in the 110meter hurdle is 1.89 meters tall and 87 kg inweight. Liu Xiang who is 1.89 meters tall and 87kg in weight is a world champion in the 110-meter hurdle.Practice我们的英语老师叫我们的英语老师叫Bruce，他对学生很严格。，他对学生很严格。Our English teacher is called Bruce, who is strict with his students.Non Clauses名词性从句名词性从句1.值得一提的是, 他是第一位在世锦赛(世锦赛)上拿到冠军的中国人。Whats worth mentioning is that he is the first Chinese to win the first prize in the world championship.Whats worth mentioning is that 值得一提的是Whats worth noticing is that 值得注意的是It means that 这意味着The subject clause(主语从句) The predictive clause表语从句非谓语NONFINITE VERBSPAST PARTICIPLE 过去分词Born in August, 1958, Michael began to perform with his four brothers as a member of “The Jackson 5” in his childhood. Born in/on , 主语主语+谓语谓语Considered as the hero of the nation, Liu Xiang is admired and respected by many people.Considered as,主语主语+谓语谓语Practice1.李李 时珍时珍出生于出生于1518年年，是一位中国历史上著名，是一位中国历史上著名的医学家（的医学家（medical scientist）。）。Born in 1518, Li Shizhen was a famous medicalscientist in Chinese history.2. 宫崎骏宫崎骏(Hayao Miyazaki)被认为是世界上最伟大被认为是世界上最伟大的卡通片绘制者的卡通片绘制者(animator)，他绘制了很多非常好，他绘制了很多非常好1.的动画片。的动画片。2.Considered the worlds greatest animator, he drew3.many good cartoons.Usain Bolt was born on August 21, 1986. Usain Bolt was a world champion in diving.A.用非谓语(infinite verbs)美化Born on August 21, 1986, Usain Bolt was a world champion indiving.B. 用同位语(appositive)美化Usain Bolt, a world champion in diving, was born on August 21, 1986.B. 用定语从句(the attributive clause)美化A.Usain Bolt was a world champion who was born on August 21, 1986.美化句子美化句子Practice同位语 定语从句 with结构 非谓语Bruce，我们的英语老师，出生于1982年，是位英国人，又高又瘦，戴着一副眼镜。Bruce, our English teacher, who was born in 1982, is a tall and thin Englishman with a pair of glasses. Born in 1982, Bruce , our English teacher, who is talland thin person with a pair of glasses.Character WritingHow many parts should the writing include? What kind of information should we write in each part?the birthplacethe time of birthAppearancePersonality(性格性格)general introduction education great events in his/her life Evaluation and the date of death教育背景教育背景(education)be admitted to university被录取到被录取到大学大学graduate from university从某大学毕业从某大学毕业receive/get a masters/doctors degree获取获取学位学位 go abroad for further studies 出国深造出国深造major in 主修主修Graduate from,majoring in毕业于毕业于主修主修巴拉克巴拉克奥巴马奥巴马 (Barack Obama )毕业于哈佛法学院(Harvard Law School )，主修法律。Barack Obama graduated from Harvard Law School, majoring in law.1991年，巴拉克年，巴拉克奥巴马奥巴马 (Barack Obama )获得了哈佛法学院的博士学位。Barack Obama received a doctors degree from Harvard Law School in 1991.评价评价(evaluation)famous/well-known at home and abroad国内外著国内外著名的名的 make great achievement in 在在取得很大成就取得很大成就speak highly of/be spoken highly of (被被)高度赞扬高度赞扬be honoured as被誉为被誉为/被尊为被尊为make great contributions to为为作出巨大贡献作出巨大贡献1.冯齐伟为中山一中作出了很大的贡献。Feng Qiwei has made great contribution to Zhong Shan No.1 Middle School.2. 莎士比亚被誉为最伟大的剧作家。Shakespeare is honoured as the greatest playwright.学生作品鉴赏学生作品鉴赏Do you know a famous playwright, Xiao Bona, who was born in Ireland in 1856. The Widowers Houses writen in 1892 was his first opera. The Pygmalion that made him get Oscar was one of the most famous opera of his. In 1925, he reward the Alfred Elemhard Nobel. He was only one that have both Oscar and the Alfred Elemhard Nobel among all literary figure. Although he left the earth and went to the heaven when he was 94, he would live our heart forever.(梁晓燕)Show Time Rewrite your writing work by using the skills learnt in the class, and show your work to the whole class. Thank You!Practice Makes Perfect!