TolearntowriteanoutlinebeforeyourwritingTolearntowriteaaTVdramascriptObjectives第1页/共24页第一页，共25页。Creating a TV drama scriptAMillieiswritingaTVdramascriptforocompetition.Readthroughthefirsthalfofheroutline.第2页/共24页第二页，共25页。BackgroundThetwins,JustinandLuke,wereathome.TheirfriendSarahlivedinHillBuilding.ThetwinsreceivedamessagefromSarah,whowasaskingforhelp.ThereweresomeburglarsinHillBuilding.StoryJustinandLukecalledthepoliceatonce.Thentheyrantherequickly.Thetwinssawthreemeninpoliceuniformscomingoutofthebuildingwithgunsintheirhands.Thetwinswerepushedintoaminibus.Theytriedtouseaknifetoopenthebackdooroftheminibus.第3页/共24页第三页，共25页。ReadPartAaloudandanswerthequestions.1.Whowasthestoryabout?Thetwins,JustinandLuke.2.WholivedinHillBuilding?TheirfriendSarah.3.WhydidSarahsendamessagetothetwins?Shewasaskingforhelp.ThereweresomeburglarsinHillBuilding.第4页/共24页第四页，共25页。4.Whatdidthetwinsdoatonce?Theycalledthepolice.5.Whatdidthetwinssee?Theysawthreemeninpoliceuniformscomingoutofthebuildingwithgunsintheirhands.6.Whathappenedtothetwins?Theywerepushedintoaminibus,buttheytriedtouseaknifetoopenthebackdooroftheminibus.第5页/共24页第五页，共25页。BMillieiswritingthefirsthalfofthestory.Helphercompleteit.Oneday,thetwins,JustinandLuke,were(1)_.Theyreceivedamessage.ItwasfromtheirfriendSarah.Shewasaskingfor(2)_.Thereweresome(3)_inHillBuilding!JustinandLukecalledthe(4)_atonce.Thenthey(5)_toHillBuildingathomehelpburglarspoliceran第6页/共24页第六页，共25页。quickly.Whentheyarrivedthere,theysawthreemenin(6)_comingoutofthebuildingwith(7)_intheirhands.“Theyarentpolicemen.Theyretheburglars“thetwinsthoughtTheyrantowardsthethreemenandtriedtostopthemfromleaving,buttheywerepushedintoa(8)_.JustinandLuketriedtoopenthebackdooroftheminibuswitha(9)_.policeuniformgunsminibusknife第7页/共24页第七页，共25页。YouarealsointerestedincreatingyourownTVdramascript.Writeanoutlineofyourstoryfirst.UsetheoutlineinPartAasamodel.YoumayalsocontinueMilliesstoryinPortB.CTipsforcreatinganinterestingstoryCatchyourreadersattentioninthefirstparagraph.第8页/共24页第八页，共25页。Makeyourreadersseewhatyourcharactersarelikebytheirappearance,actions,speechesandthoughts.Writemeaningfuldialogues.Choosetwoormorescenesforyourstory.Describewhathappens,whatthecharactersandwheretheturningpointsare.Createaconflicttomakeyourstoryinteresting.第9页/共24页第九页，共25页。SampleWritingBackgroundTwobestfriend,TinaandKatieTheyworkinasupermarketTheirboss,MrGreen,isstrictandalwaysshoutsatthem.MrGreenlikesplayingtennisverymuch,butheneverwonanytennistitles.StoryMrGreenwonhisfirsttitleinalocalcompetition.HegaveTinaandKatietwobigboxesofchocolateseach.TinaandKatiewereshocked.Theyfoundoutthereasonattheendoftheday.第10页/共24页第十页，共25页。TinaandKatiebothworkinasupermarket.Theyarebeatfriendsandtheyenjoyworkingtogether.TinaandKatieareyoungandalwayshappy.TheyliketellingjokesandwatchingprogrammesaboutmusiconTV.However,theydonotliketheirboss,MrGreen,becauseheisverystrictandalwaysshoutsatthem.Once,Mr第11页/共24页第十一页，共25页。GreenshoutedsoloudlyatTinathathemadehercry.TinaandKatiestoptellingjokeswhenMrGreenisnearby.MrGreenlikesplayingtennisverymuch.Heplaystennisthreetimesaweekandtakespartinmanytennismatches,butheneverwonanytennistitles.Oneday,MrGreenarrivedatworkasusual第12页/共24页第十二页，共25页。andsmilesatTinaandKatieashegavethemtwobigboxesofchocolateseach.Thegirlswereshocked.Attheendoftheday,theyfoundoutthereasonwhyMrGreenwassohappy.Hewonhisfirsttitleinalocalcompetition!TinaandKatiethoughtlifewouldbemuchbetterworkingatthesupermarketfromthenon.第13页/共24页第十三页，共25页。第14页/共24页第十四页，共25页。1.Thedirectorisgoingtogiveusareport_howtomakemovie.A.onB.forC.inD.of2.Thewindblows_.A.hardandhardB.B.harderandharderC.moreandmorehardlyD.morehardlyandmorehardlyExercisesI.I.单项填空单项填空(tinkng)(tinkng)AB第15页/共24页第十五页，共25页。3.Theboysareplayingfootball_thegirlsaresinginganddancing.A.as B.whenC.beforeD.while4.Sheis_apopularteacherthatallherstudentslikeherverymuch.A.veryB.soC.ratherD.suchDD第16页/共24页第十六页，共25页。5.Heis_excitedtohearthegoodnews.A.fartoo B.toofarC.toomoreD.moretoo6.TheOlympicGameswillbecovered_.A.aliveB.lifeC.liveD.livingAC第17页/共24页第十七页，共25页。7.Thenumberofchairsintheroom_ten.Imafraidanumberofchairsintheroom_lost.A.is;isB.is;areC.are;is D.are;are8.Nothingcanbedone_hereturns.A.asB.afterC.whileD.untilBD第18页/共24页第十八页，共25页。9.Wheresyourbrother?Hes_work.A.inB.onC.aboutD.at10.YoucanwatchTV_8to10tonight.A.fromB.asC.betweenD.whileDA第19页/共24页第十九页，共25页。11.Tomwantstoattendthesportsmeeting.(改为(iwi)同义句)Tomwantsto_thesportsmeeting.12.IwonderhowIcancheerupthesickkids.(改为(iwi)同义句)Iwonder_cheerupthesickkids.13.MarywatchesthegameshowonTVonSunday.(改为(iwi)一般疑问句)_Mary_thegameshowonTVonSunday?II. II. 句型句型(j xn)(j xn)转换转换takepartinhowtoDoeswatch第20页/共24页第二十页，共25页。14.Hefinishedreadingthenovelbeforehisparentscameback.(改为否定句)He_readingthenovelbeforehisparentscameback.15.Thenewbuildingwillbefinishedinoneyear.(对画线部分(bfen)提问)_willthenewbuildingbefinished?didntfinishHowlong第21页/共24页第二十一页，共25页。HomeworkGoonwithyourstoryifyouhaventfinisheditinclassandinvitesomestudentstoactoutthestory.第22页/共24页第二十二页，共25页。第23页/共24页第二十三页，共25页。谢谢大家(dji)观赏！第24页/共24页第二十四页，共25页。内容(nirng)总结To learn to write an outline before your writing。shouts at them.。hard and hard。Hes _ work.。one year. (对画线部分提问)。谢谢(xi xie)大家观赏第二十五页，共25页。