第三篇第三篇写作写作第二章第二章 基础写作基础写作第四节议论文第四节议论文专专题题一一议议论论文文写写作作之之论论证证观观点点论论证证观观点点无无疑疑属属于于议议论论文文的的范范畴畴，着着重重于于说说理理性性和和逻逻辑辑性性。考考生生在在写写作作前前要要对对信信息息点点进进行行分分析析，理理清清信信息息点点之之间间是是递递进进，转转折折还是因果关系。还是因果关系。You are writing to tell me that you are going to open the online bank service for shopping online but I dont think its a good idea.There_is_no_doubt_that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping but the disadvantages of it far outweigh the advantages.First_of_all，shopping online is a waste of money because buyers tend to be persuaded into buying something they dont really need.Second，some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due_to一、观摩领悟一、观摩领悟lack of supervision.Whats_worse， nowadays there_are also many reports related to online shopping that personal information and even bank accounts are stolen.Therefore，I suggest that you think twice and remain rational when you are shopping online.【结构分析与解读结构分析与解读】本本文文的的结结构构是是总总分分总总，第第一一句句总总起起说说明明作作者者的的观观点点，中中间间部部分分是是分分述述，最最后后一一句句使使用用therefore总总结结作作者者的的观观点点。句句运运用用了了there is no doubt that的的句句型型，采采用用了了先先抑抑后后扬扬的的写写作作手手法法，使使观观点点更更客客观观和和鲜鲜明明；句句运运用用了了because引引导导的的状状语语从从句句；句句运运用用due to 短短语语连连接接；句句运运用用了了there be句句型型和和定定语语从从句句；句句运运用用了了宾宾语语从从句句表表述述。在在连连贯贯性性方方面面，本本文文使使用用了了first of all，second，whats worse等等递递进进连连词使文章的层次分明。词使文章的层次分明。1论证观点文写作应注意的问题。论证观点文写作应注意的问题。(1)注注意意审审题题，避避免免缺缺漏漏信信息息点点。一一般般而而言言，观观点点论论证的文章通常都是总证的文章通常都是总分或总分或总分分总的结构总的结构。(2)在在论论证证观观点点的的时时候候要要注注意意行行文文严严密密的的逻逻辑辑性性，因因此此考考生生要要注注意意使使用用相相关关的的连连词词、副副词词或或者者短短语语提提升升文文章章的层次感。的层次感。(3)在在语语言言运运用用方方面面，考考生生可可以以掌掌握握一一些些常常用用于于议议论论文文写写作作的的短短语语和和句句型型，如如compared with.，it is clear /obvious that.，from what I have mentioned above we can see that.等。等。二、写作指导二、写作指导 2相关短语。相关短语。come to realize开始意识到开始意识到as important as和和一样重要一样重要push sb.to do sth. 使某人做某事使某人做某事focus more on更加关注更加关注more attention should be given to应该更加关注应该更加关注both necessary and beneficial既有必要又有利既有必要又有利in summary总之总之 end up doing以做以做结束结束search for寻找寻找far outweigh.远远比远远比重要重要become disoriented变得不知所措变得不知所措due to lack of supervision由于缺乏监督由于缺乏监督whats worse更糟糕的是更糟糕的是be harmful to对对有害有害3写写作作要要点点：总总述述分分述述各各要要点点总总结结观观点点提提出建议。出建议。(一一)翻译下列句子。翻译下列句子。1很多学生认为它有助于培养朗读的习惯。很多学生认为它有助于培养朗读的习惯。_2因此要更加注意英语口语教学和学习。因此要更加注意英语口语教学和学习。_u即学即即学即练练Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud.Therefore，more attention should be given to teaching and learning spoken English.3其其次次，由由于于缺缺乏乏监监督督，有有些些网网上上出出售售的的产产品品很可能是假货。很可能是假货。_4毫无疑问，网上购物很方便。毫无疑问，网上购物很方便。_Second，some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due to lack of supervision.There is no doubt that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping.5很很多多学学生生过过度度依依赖赖互互联联网网，以以致致失失去去了了创创新能力。新能力。_Many students rely so much on the Internet that they have lost their ability to create. (二二)基础写作。基础写作。据据新新闻闻报报道道，长长城城的的一一部部分分城城墙墙已已经经被被当当地地居居民民严严重重破破坏坏。你你看看了了报报道道后后想想写写一一份份倡倡议议书书，题题为为“To protect the cultural heritages in our country”向向人人民民日日报报投投稿稿，呼呼吁吁人人们们爱爱护护我我们们国国家家的的文文化化遗遗产产，提升保护意识。提升保护意识。写作内容写作内容1长长城城是是古古老老的的中中国国文文化化的的象象征征和和世世界界七七大大奇奇迹之一，但由于当地人们的破坏，现在处于危险中。迹之一，但由于当地人们的破坏，现在处于危险中。 2我我们们国国家家的的其其他他珍珍贵贵文文物物也也正正遭遭到到破破坏坏，人人们们有有这这种种愚愚蠢蠢的的做做法法是是因因为为他他们们没没有有意意识识到到保保护护文文化化遗产的重要性。遗产的重要性。 3.文文化化遗遗产产是是祖祖先先留留给给我我们们的的宝宝贵贵财财富富，也也是是他他们智慧的象征，在历史上起着重要的作用。们智慧的象征，在历史上起着重要的作用。4让让缺缺乏乏文文化化知知识识的的人人了了解解文文物物遗遗产产保保护护的的重重要要性。性。5政政府府应应采采取取保保护护的的措措施施，甚甚至至制制定定法法律律惩惩罚罚那那些破坏文化遗产的人。些破坏文化遗产的人。 写作要求写作要求只能使用只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。_参考范文参考范文To protect the cultural heritages in our countryThe Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World and a symbol of the ancient Chinese civilization，but now it is in danger and some day it may disappear because of some local peoples destructions.Some other valuable relics in our country have been destroyed as well，the reason for peoples foolish behaviors is that the local people are not aware of their importance of protection.Cultural heritages_are precious treasures left to us by our ancestors and arealso symbols of the wisdoms，which played a very important role in history.In my opinion，firstly，we should make some people who lack cultural knowledge know about the importance of the historic relics because destroying them means destroying ourselves.Secondly， the government should take some measures to protect them，and if necessary，laws will be made to punish those who destroy them on purpose.