Writing:An introduction to a placeChecking the homeworkProduce/ResoucesTourismStatus/ReputationGeographyOthersHistory/PopulationIntroduction to a placeChecking the homeworkV. phrasesN. phrasesPrep. phrasesGeographyHistoryPopulationStatusReputationProduceResourceTourismOthersBrainstorming以以为邻为邻由由组成组成坐落在坐落在面积有面积有.盛产盛产有有年历史年历史60米高米高旅游景点旅游景点be nearbe made ofbe located inhave/with an area ofbe rich inhave/with a history ofbe 60 metres tallplace of interestPolishing以以为邻为邻由由组成组成坐落在坐落在面积有面积有.盛产盛产有有年历史年历史60米高米高旅游景点旅游景点neighbourconsist ofbe situated incover/take up an area ofbe abundant in history can date back tobe 60 metres in heighttourist attraction/scenic spotTranslate the following sentences into English accordingly.1.我的家乡位于广东省南部我的家乡位于广东省南部, 毗邻香港毗邻香港 。（全倒装）。（全倒装）2.广州广州, 拥有一千三百万人口的一座城市拥有一千三百万人口的一座城市, 有两千多有两千多年的历史了。（定语从句）年的历史了。（定语从句）3.这座城市占地面积达这座城市占地面积达7, 434平方公里平方公里, 人口大约是人口大约是10, 000, 000。（非谓语）。（非谓语）4.它自然资源得天独厚它自然资源得天独厚, 有丰富的煤和金矿有丰富的煤和金矿, 而且气而且气候温和。（候温和。（not only，but also）5.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。（名词性从句）我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。（名词性从句）典型例题典型例题 你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点，用点，用5个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简介。你的介绍应包个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简介。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入5个句子中。个句子中。【信息要点信息要点】历史历史有两千多年的历史。有两千多年的历史。特点特点世界上最长的城墙世界上最长的城墙, 长长6000多千米多千米;建筑材料主要为石头建筑材料主要为石头, 砖头砖头, 修建工作都是人工进行修建工作都是人工进行; 主要用于防御外来入侵者主要用于防御外来入侵者, 沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台台(watchtower)。现状现状世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。城观光旅游。写作要求写作要求只能使用只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。个句子表达全部的内容。评分标准评分标准 句子结构准确句子结构准确, 信息内容完整信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。篇章结构连贯。例题导写例题导写1. 按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即即“历史、特点、现状历史、特点、现状”)的先后顺序进行写的先后顺序进行写作，这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间作，这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间, 也也避免错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。避免错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。2. 草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一。草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一。请翻译要点：请翻译要点：(1) 有有(多久多久)的历史的历史 _It has a history of . (2) 世界最长的城墙世界最长的城墙 _(3) 6000多千米长多千米长 _(4) 由石头由石头, 砖头做成砖头做成 _(5) 由人工修建由人工修建 _be constructed by handthe longest wall in the world6000 kilometers longbe made of stones and bricks6) 防御外来入侵者防御外来入侵者 _(7) 每隔几百米每隔几百米 _every few hundred meters prevent the country from being invaded; defend the country against foreign invaders(8) 著名旅游景点之一著名旅游景点之一 _ _(9) 吸引许多外国游客吸引许多外国游客 _one of the famous scenic spots; one of the famous places of interest; one of the famous tourist attractionsattract many foreign visitors3. 规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语过长过长, 应转用应转用 “a / an / the +名词名词+of”的表达的表达, 例如例如, “两千多年的历两千多年的历史史”应该写成应该写成“a history of two thousand years”, 而不能写成而不能写成“two thousand years history”。4. 变换表达变换表达, 丰富句式。丰富句式。请按要求完成句子：请按要求完成句子：(1) It is more than 6000 kilometers in length, _(“是世界上最长的城墙是世界上最长的城墙”, 使用非限制性定语从使用非限制性定语从句句)(2) It was the Great Wall _ _in ancient times. (“帮助人们防御外来入侵者帮助人们防御外来入侵者”, 使用强调句使用强调句) that helped people fight against the foreign invaderswhich makes it the longest wall in the world(3)_, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.(“长城长城主要用于防御外来入侵者主要用于防御外来入侵者”, 使用原因状语从句使用原因状语从句)(4) The Great Wall is one of the well-known places of interest on earth, _.(“每年吸引许每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游多外国游客到长城观光旅游”, 使用非谓语结构使用非谓语结构)As the Great Wall was built to defend peopleagainst the invaders appealing to a largenumber of foreigners every year(5) The Great Wall is _ a famous historical attraction _ it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors each year.(使用使用“如此如此以致以致”的句型表达的句型表达)(6) So _that it attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors home and abroad every year.(“长城如此吸长城如此吸引引”, 使用倒装句使用倒装句)attractive is the Great WallsuchthatAs the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year.参考范文参考范文 Ladies and Gentlemen，welcome to the Great Wall. The Great Wall, which is more than 6, 000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2, 000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine. 多种表达Hong Kong, a city situated close to the south of Guangdong and to the east of Macao, is famous for traveling, food, shopping and film industry as wellLocated close to the south of Guangdong and neighbouring Macao, Hongkong is famous for traveling, food, shopping as well as film industryHong Kong is situated close to the south of Guangdong and to the east of Macao, which is famous for traveling, food, shopping as well as film industry A wide range of world brands flock in Hong Kong, making it an ideal place for shopping In this modern city, there are various kinds of brands from all over the world for people to choose from, which makes Hong Kong a paradise for shopping. There are so various world brands here that it is a paradise for shoppingHong Kong is also an exciting place where people can enjoy their leisure time and holiday by visiting the famous scenic spots, such as the Disneyland, the Ocean Park, the Lemma Island and so on参考范文参考范文 Hong Kong, a city situated close to the south of Guangdong and to the east of Macao, is famous for traveling, food, shopping and film industry as well. In this modern city, there are various kinds of brands from all over the world for people to choose from, which makes Hong Kong an ideal place for shopping. Hong Kong is also an exciting place where people can enjoy their leisure time and holiday by visiting the famous scenic spots, such as the Disneyland, the Ocean Park, the Lemma Island and so on. In the restaurants run by the local people, visitors can enjoy the delicious food at a reasonable price. Whats more, Hong Kong people are creative and passionate, creating their promising future with wisdom and diligence. London, the most important industrial city of England, serves as the centre of its political, economic and cultural life. Located in the southeast of England, it covers an area of 1580 square kilometers. The weather is changeable and it rains often. People can enjoy the convenience of the means of transportation, but at a relatively expensive price. With its beautiful scenery, London attracts visitors from all over the world, leaving them a deep impression. 参考范文参考范文 Dear Bob, I was so glad to hear that you are coming to Shenzhen for a travel. Shenzhen Bay Sports Center, nicknamed as the “Spring Cocoon” because of its shape of a cocoon, is located at the northeast corner of the center of Nanshan District, Shenzhen and next to Hong Kong. Covering an area of 326,000 square metres, it includes a stadium, a gym, a natatorium and some star hotels. Its construction work started in October 2008 and came to an end at the end of 2010. It was in the Spring Cocoon that the opening ceremony of 26th Universiade was held as well as the training and competitions for football , pingpong ball, swimming and so on and after the Universiade it will be open to the public. As a new landmark representing the image of Shenzhen City, it means that excellent young athletes rush out of the cocoon and into the world. SincerelyYours,Li Hua