English WritingByWenMingxiuI 书面表达的主要形式书面表达的主要形式A A 记叙文记叙文记叙文记叙文（尤其是故事性的）（尤其是故事性的）（尤其是故事性的）（尤其是故事性的）注意五个注意五个注意五个注意五个WW一个一个一个一个H.H.即即即即: :When , Who ,What ,Where , Why, When , Who ,What ,Where , Why, HowHowB B其它应用文其它应用文其它应用文其它应用文 包括：书信、日记、通知、包括：书信、日记、通知、包括：书信、日记、通知、包括：书信、日记、通知、便条便条便条便条( (请假条、电话留言、留言条请假条、电话留言、留言条请假条、电话留言、留言条请假条、电话留言、留言条) )及及及及贺卡等贺卡等贺卡等贺卡等 。C C几种文体的结合几种文体的结合几种文体的结合几种文体的结合 这是很值得我们关注这是很值得我们关注这是很值得我们关注这是很值得我们关注的一个趋向。如在信中进行说明，是的一个趋向。如在信中进行说明，是的一个趋向。如在信中进行说明，是的一个趋向。如在信中进行说明，是一封信，但又是一篇以空间为顺序的一封信，但又是一篇以空间为顺序的一封信，但又是一篇以空间为顺序的一封信，但又是一篇以空间为顺序的说明文。说明文。说明文。说明文。 II平时训练中的几个注意点平时训练中的几个注意点 1、准备工作准备工作仔细仔细审题审题，明确要求。，明确要求。罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要点。点。紧扣紧扣要点要点，寻求思路。，寻求思路。草拟提纲，确定开头，选词、选句，拟好结草拟提纲，确定开头，选词、选句，拟好结尾尾（可适当发表自己的观点）。（可适当发表自己的观点）。 2写作之中写作之中.开门见山，紧扣主题开门见山，紧扣主题。.语言正确语言正确,规范地道规范地道。 参观农场的日记：参观农场的日记：关于度假：关于度假：句型、结构，避免中国式英语句型、结构，避免中国式英语。 Ispent10yuanbuythebook.Hebybiketoschool. 标点符号LastSundaywevisitedafarm.Wehadahappyholidaylastweekend.重短轻长重短轻长,就易避难就易避难。 .过渡自然过渡自然,表达流畅表达流畅。以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。 正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。不重复使用可置换的词。不重复使用可置换的词。.适当评论适当评论,发表己见发表己见。Whatabusyweekend!Heisagoodboy.3.成文之后成文之后 . 一般语法项目的检查一般语法项目的检查 人称人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office.时态时态: They are going to the island yesterday.主谓一致主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法习惯用法: He helps me in my English. . 注意语序注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句句)1. I withmyfriendsplayedsoccer. I playedsoccerwithmyfriends.2.Theweaherishownice!Hownicetheweatheris!3.Hedidntknowwherewasthebookshop.He didnt know where the bookshop was. 符合习惯符合习惯 My work is very busy. I very much like it.Im very busy with my work.I like it very much. 书写规范书写规范,卷面整洁。卷面整洁。小结n审题，抓点n造句，成文n改错，誉写III书面表达：书面表达：Write about what you did last weekend.B did my homeworkCplayedsoccerA cleaned my roomD watched TVE visited my auntF went to the movies范文：范文：I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I _1_. In the afternoon, I _2_, It was a little difficult. On Saturday night,I _3_My auntcooked dinner for me. On Sunday morning, I _4_. I watched a good movie Named “kungfu”.Then in the afternoon, I _5_with my friends. On Sunday night, I_6_.I saw an interesting talk show.范文：范文：I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I A cleaned my room . In the afternoon, I B did my homework. It was a little difficult. On Saturday night, I E visited my aunt .My aunt cooked dinner for me. On Sunday morning, I F went to the movies . I watched a good movie named “kungfu”. Then in the afternoon, I C played Soccer with my friends. On Sunday night, ID watched TV I saw an interesting talk show.IV书面表达书面表达(15分）分）根据图表内容写一篇英语短文，介绍根据图表内容写一篇英语短文，介绍你的朋友你的朋友David。短文题目已给出。短文题目已给出。要求要求不得逐字翻译，允许适当发挥；不得逐字翻译，允许适当发挥；可用不同方式表达图表内容可用不同方式表达图表内容词数：词数：60词左右。词左右。姓名姓名David性别性别男男国籍国籍英英国国出生出生地地London出生出生日期日期1993年年6月月18日日爱好爱好足球、电脑、音乐足球、电脑、音乐其它其它情况情况三年前随父母来中国北京。现在北三年前随父母来中国北京。现在北京第京第1中学学习，学习成绩优良，中学学习，学习成绩优良，是学校足球队队员。是学校足球队队员。范文：范文：MygoodfriendDavidDavid is my good friend. Hesan English boy. He was born inLondononJune18,1993.Helikesplayingfootball,workingonacomputerandlisteningtomusic.DavidcametoBeijing,Chinawithhisparentsthreeyearsago.NowhesstudyingatNo.1MiddleSchoolinBeijing.Hesgoodathislessons,andhesontheschoolfootballteam. yesterday once moreyesterday once morewhen I was young Id listen to the radio when I was young Id listen to the radio waiting for my favorite songswaiting for my favorite songswhen they played Id sing along,when they played Id sing along,it made me smile.it made me smile.Those were such happy times and not so Those were such happy times and not so long agolong agohow I wondered where theyd gone.how I wondered where theyd gone.but theyre back again just like a long lost but theyre back again just like a long lost friendfriendall the songs I love so wellall the songs I love so well. .n nI:Yesterday_Once_More.rmVIHomework: 就植树节这一天的植树活动写一篇简短的日就植树节这一天的植树活动写一篇简短的日就植树节这一天的植树活动写一篇简短的日就植树节这一天的植树活动写一篇简短的日记记记记 ( (单词数：单词数：单词数：单词数：5050左右左右左右左右) )。 提示：提示：提示：提示：1 1 1 1穿旧衣服；穿旧衣服；穿旧衣服；穿旧衣服；2 2 2 2早餐后乘车到西山；早餐后乘车到西山；早餐后乘车到西山；早餐后乘车到西山；3 3 3 3挖坑、种树、浇水挖坑、种树、浇水挖坑、种树、浇水挖坑、种树、浇水; ; ; ;每人种树每人种树每人种树每人种树3 3 3 3棵；棵；棵；棵；4 4 4 412121212点结束点结束点结束点结束; ; ; ;5 5 5 5感想；感想；感想；感想；6.6.6.6.天气晴朗。天气晴朗。天气晴朗。天气晴朗。 ( ( ( (Tree Planting DayTree Planting Day，the West Hill ,by bus ,in old clothes.plant the West Hill ,by bus ,in old clothes.plant three young treesthree young trees ) ) ) ) Monday Mar Monday Mar Monday Mar Monday Mar12th12th12th12th，2009 Fine 2009 Fine 2009 Fine 2009 Fine Thank you for listening!