读后续写读后续写 1.双膝跪地双膝跪地 2.匆匆下楼匆匆下楼 3.屏住呼吸屏住呼吸 4.站起身站起身 5.瞥了某人一眼瞥了某人一眼 6.相视一笑相视一笑 7.拥抱某人拥抱某人 8.站着站着/坐着一动不动坐着一动不动fall/sink/drop to ones knees fall to the ground on ones kneesrace/rush/tear down the stairshold ones breathrise to ones feetshoot/throw/cast a glance at sbexchange smileshug sb/give sb a hug/throw ones arms around sb/fold sb in ones armsstand/sit stillReview人物的动作描写：1.放声大哭放声大哭 2.吃惊地瞪大眼睛吃惊地瞪大眼睛 3.（吓得）心提到了嗓子眼（吓得）心提到了嗓子眼 4.强忍住泪水强忍住泪水burst into tearsbe wide-eyed with shock/with ones eyes wide open in shockones heart is in ones mouth/have ones heart in ones mouthhold/fight back ones tearsReview人物的情人物的情绪绪描写描写【拓展拓展】tears roll/run/stream/flow down sbs cheeks 潸然泪下tears well up in sbs eyes 泪如泉涌sbs heart is/was pounding.某人的心砰砰直跳。sbs brain is blank.某人的头脑一片空白。A wave of fear swept over me.一阵恐惧传遍我的全身。Review人物的情人物的情绪绪描写描写Step 1 read about the passage重难点梳理：解决重难点词汇、句式，重难点梳理：解决重难点词汇、句式，重难点梳理：解决重难点词汇、句式，重难点梳理：解决重难点词汇、句式，真正读懂文章。真正读懂文章。真正读懂文章。真正读懂文章。Pumpkin(南瓜)carving at Halloween is a family tradition.We visit a local farm every October.In the pumpkin field,I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home,and as the eldest child I have an advantage I carried an 85-pounder back last year.输出词块输出词块找出；找到找出；找到合成词合成词-pounder：重：重磅的东西磅的东西 Para 1 介绍万圣节的家庭传统介绍万圣节的家庭传统 This year,it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother,Jason,was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table,with my mom filming the annual event.Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With 复合结构，表示伴随复合结构，表示伴随动作描写动作描写把头硬塞进南瓜里把头硬塞进南瓜里输出词块输出词块完全合理完全合理Para 2 讲述今年的比赛过程讲述今年的比赛过程 With the pumpkin resting on the table,hole uppermost,I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then,as I went on with my task,unwilling to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry.Finally I managed to put my whole head into it,like a cork(软木塞)forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.动作描写动作描写弯下腰弯下腰动作描写动作描写把头靠在洞口把头靠在洞口动作描写动作描写卡住卡住动作描写动作描写直起身来直起身来Para 3 讲述讲述“我我”为了证明自己的为了证明自己的南瓜最大，把头硬塞进南瓜的过程南瓜最大，把头硬塞进南瓜的过程 My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy.“Im going to set it down,now,”I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest.It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my nose got in the way.I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle,but it was no use.“I cant get it out!”I shouted,my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.Para 4 头被卡住拔不出来头被卡住拔不出来合成词合成词adj 短暂的短暂的动作描写动作描写支撑它的重量支撑它的重量动作描写动作描写把头取出来把头取出来动作描写动作描写使劲拔使劲拔动作描写动作描写用力地抵住用力地抵住动作描写动作描写把头转来转去把头转来转去独立主格结构独立主格结构Step2 梳理情节梳理情节1.1.1.1.圈出关键信息圈出关键信息圈出关键信息圈出关键信息2.2.2.2.找出情节线索找出情节线索找出情节线索找出情节线索3.3.3.3.分析人物情感变化分析人物情感变化分析人物情感变化分析人物情感变化4.4.4.4.把握文章主旨把握文章主旨把握文章主旨把握文章主旨圈出关键信息（圈出关键信息（5W+1H5W+1H）where/where/when when1.at home2.a day in October before HalloweenwhowhoI,dad,mom,three brothers(including Jason),sisterwhatwhatMy head was stuck inside a pumpkin,and I was trying to pull it out.why/why/howhowWe forgot to weigh our pumpkins.To prove my pumpkin was bigger,I forced my head inside it.I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin.biggest pumpkin.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I was determined to prove my point Step 2 梳理情节梳理情节These are the clue 1我和兄弟姐妹们比赛找最大的南瓜我和兄弟姐妹们比赛找最大的南瓜,却忘了在去瓤却忘了在去瓤前称重。我想证明自己的南瓜最大。前称重。我想证明自己的南瓜最大。I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matterFinally I managed to put my whole head into itStep 2 梳理情节梳理情节These are the clue 2我认为把头伸进南瓜里能解决问题。经过一番我认为把头伸进南瓜里能解决问题。经过一番努力，我成功把头塞进了南瓜。努力，我成功把头塞进了南瓜。“I cant get it out!”Step 2 梳理情节梳理情节These are the clue 3当我想把头拔出来时，却发现头卡住当我想把头拔出来时，却发现头卡住了。了。This year,it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother,Jason,was the winner.Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides,but I was determined to prove my point.All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table,with my mom filming the annual event.Im unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table,hole uppermost,I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then,as I went on with my task,unwilling to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry.Step 2 梳理情节梳理情节I：competitiveMy excitement was short-lived.The pump