看图作文看图作文写作技巧写作技巧看图作文看图作文的关键的关键： 1. 看懂图片，看懂图片，以防跑题。以防跑题。2. 确定短文的时态和人称。确定短文的时态和人称。3. 审审-译译-改改-誊誊4. 适当添加评论等内容适当添加评论等内容2011年北京高考假设你是你是李华，本周你们正在学习假设你是你是李华，本周你们正在学习Life in the Future单元。白天，你们进行了讨论；夜晚，你梦见乘坐时间飞单元。白天，你们进行了讨论；夜晚，你梦见乘坐时间飞船到船到3012年的学校参观。请根据下面五幅图，写一篇日记。年的学校参观。请根据下面五幅图，写一篇日记。时态和人称时态和人称人称：一人称人称：一人称时态：本周学习（现在时）时态：本周学习（现在时） 对梦中的描述（过去式）对梦中的描述（过去式）本周正在学习本周正在学习Life in the Future白天进行了讨论白天进行了讨论We are learning Life in the Future this week.We have learned Life in the Future.We have been learning Life in the Future this week.We had a discussion about it. 本周正在学习本周正在学习Life in the Future白天进行了讨论白天进行了讨论We learn Life in the Future this week.We learned Life in the Future this week.We have a dicussion about it.同学们存在的问题同学们存在的问题晚上，我梦见乘坐时间飞船到晚上，我梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观年的学校参观At night, I dreamed that I visited a school in 3012 by a time craft through the time tunnel.I visited the school and talked with the students at that time.在未来学校中，我参观了学校在未来学校中，我参观了学校和学生进行交谈和学生进行交谈晚上，我梦见乘坐时间飞船到晚上，我梦见乘坐时间飞船到3012年的学校参观年的学校参观At night, I dreamed that I went to the year 3012. I took a time craft and throughed a time tunnel. I visited a future school.在未来学校中，我参观了学校在未来学校中，我参观了学校和学生进行交谈和学生进行交谈I visited the school and talked with the students at that time. To my great surprise, there was no classroom in the future school. Students all learn the knowledge by looking at the computers.同学们存在的问题同学们存在的问题当我要飞回当我要飞回2012年的时候，我的年的时候，我的时间飞船的警报器响了，我感觉时间飞船的警报器响了，我感觉非常害怕非常害怕After the visit, I was on my way back to the year 2012.My alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.当我要飞回当我要飞回2012年的时候，我的年的时候，我的时间飞船的警报器响了，我感觉时间飞船的警报器响了，我感觉非常害怕非常害怕After visited, I was on my way back to the year 2012.Suddenly, the alarm on the craft begin ring/shout. It seemed something wrong.That is something wrong.Something seemed to be wrong.There must be something wrong.The time crafted shoked.同学们存在的问题同学们存在的问题我吓得一下子惊醒，原来是起床的我吓得一下子惊醒，原来是起床的时候了时候了Just at that time, I woke up. The alarm was still ringing. It was the alarm clock that woke me up. It was time to get up.一，一，简单句与复合句并用，长短句结合简单句与复合句并用，长短句结合 二，二，简单句简单句合并为复合句合并为复合句 三，把复合句改为简单句三，把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语 四，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、四，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等. 五，注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。五，注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 六六. 适当的联想与发挥。适当的联想与发挥。非谓语动词非谓语动词从句从句特殊句式特殊句式注意：不能不用，注意：不能不用， 且不能少用，且不能少用， 但也不能滥用。但也不能滥用。使使用用高高级级句句式式定语从句，定语从句，状语从句，状语从句，名词性从句名词性从句(主、宾、表、同位语从句主、宾、表、同位语从句)倒装句，倒装句，感叹句，强调感叹句，强调句，虚拟语气句，虚拟语气We have been learning Life in the Future this week.We had a discussion about it.This week, we have been learning Life in the Future. In this unit, we have not only learned a lot about our future, but we discussed about this topic as well.At night, I dreamed that I visited a school in 3012 by a time craft through the time tunnel.I visited the school and talked with the students at that time.At night, I had an interesting dream in which I travelled through the time tunnel to the year of 3012 by time craft. I visited the school and had a nice talk with the students there.After the visit, I was on my way back to the year 2012.My alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.After the visit, I was on my way back to the year 2012 when my alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.I was shocked.Just at that time, I woke up. The alarm was still ringing. It was the alarm clock that woke me up. It was time to get up.Shocked, I woke up suddenly. However, the alarm in the time craft was still ringing! Looking around, I realized it was the alarm clock that warned that it was time to get up. What a relief! It was only a dream! .that reminded me of the time to get up.Sept 21, 2012 Friday Fine This week, we have been learning Life in the Future. In this unit, we have not only learned a lot about our future, but we discussed about this topic as well.At night, I had an interesting dream in which I travelled through the time tunnel to the year of 3012 by time craft. I visited the school and had a nice talk with the students there.After the visit, I was on my way back to the year 2012 when my alarm on the craft sounded to warn that there was something wrong with the craft.Shocked, I woke up suddenly. However, the alarm in the time craft was still ringing! Looking around, I realized it was the alarm clock which reminded me of the time to get up. What a relief! It was only a dream! 总结：总结：1. 审题一定要仔细审题一定要仔细2. 要按要求写作要按要求写作 (guided writing, directions)3. 文章中描写部分要注意文章中描写部分要注意“人称，时态人称，时态”的统一的统一4. 长短句结合，合理使用高级句式长短句结合，合理使用高级句式5. 不要盲目套不要盲目套用信件等应用文用信件等应用文的模式的模式6. 功夫下在平时。夯实基础，功夫下在平时。夯实基础，注重积累注重积累好词好句好词好句