书面表达写作技巧面表达写作技巧词汇词汇,句型句型 （高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）多样化（较复杂） 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体语言得体要要点点全全连连接接词词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？语言地道，语言地道，规范规范a compositiontopic sentence （主题句）（主题句）supporting sentences （扩展句）（扩展句）ending （结尾句（结尾句 ）过渡词：过渡词：first, second, finally , and, besides, also, but, however, whats more Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich.一一 改变句子的开头方式，改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首可以把状语置于句首.The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.Hungry, the boy hurried home.The boy, hungry, hurried home.二二. Transformation of sentences in writing(写作中的句型转换写作中的句型转换)A. 合并为简单句合并为简单句1.把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.二二. Transformation of sentences in writing(写作中的句型转换写作中的句型转换)2. 把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back. B. 合并为复合句合并为复合句1.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. which In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant C. 把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句1. 把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语 She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies. Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.2.把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语I insisted that he should go.I insisted on him going.三三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下结构：句式，要灵活运用以下结构：倒装句倒装句强调句强调句主从复合句主从复合句分词状语分词状语With 复合结构复合结构Though he is wealthy, he works hard.Wealthy as he is, he works hard.In spite of /Despite his wealth,he works hard.He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.I came up with a good idea.注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。一些单词，以增加文采。 四四.use “ complicated / advanced words” A. Second, twenty years ago, teenagers listened to music with tape recorders. Differently, today we use mp3, mp4 and even mp5 which are easy to take.B. Another change is in communication. Instead of writing letters, teenagers nowadays prefer writing e-mails or calling to keep in touch with friends.C. First, teenagers of twenty years ago learn from Lei Feng and Zhang Haidi, while now we consider Bill Gates and as our role models. D. What great changes they are!E. Great changes have taken place in teenagers life during the past twenty years. Correct Order : _E C A B D一，改变句子的开头方式一，改变句子的开头方式二，句型转换二，句型转换A.合并为简单句合并为简单句把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为分词短语把其中一句改为介词短语把其中一句改为介词短语B.合并为复合句合并为复合句C.把复合句改为简单句把复合句改为简单句把从句改为分词短语把从句改为分词短语把从句改为介词短语把从句改为介词短语三，避免只使用一两个句式，三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with 复合结构复合结构等等. 四，注意使用高级词汇四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。代替一些单词，以增加文采。五五. .有效使用连接词有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。构紧凑。 1 汉式英语汉式英语 2 句式单一句式单一 平铺直叙平铺直叙 3 基础词汇掌握不牢基础词汇掌握不牢 4 书写不规范书写不规范Common mistakes9 9分分6 6分分2424分分make sentences 3 determine what to write1copy6check 5Writing steps:4 edit2 think out the key wordsAttentioAttention n1. 格式格式 2. 人称人称3.时态时态 4. 要点要点5.语法语法 6. 字数字数 7. 书写书写书面表达（满分书面表达（满分30分）分） 你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报， 主题为：主题为： 保护环境从我做起。保护环境从我做起。 请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment.save electricityturn off the lightsprotect our forestsuse paper wiselynot use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticksuse both sides of paperDo youinclude enough information?use proper linking words?make any spelling or grammar errors?Is your handwriting clear enough to read?our show timeour show timeWhat can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. To love the environment is to love ourselves. As to me, I will try to save electricity in my daily life by remembering to turn off the lights when I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. It is both sides of paper that should be used whenever it is possible. Whats more, never will I use things like paper cups or disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. In a word, with doing all these small things, we will not only improve our environment but also help make our world a better place to live in.Rome is not built in one day.Rome is not built in one day.Practice makes perfect!Practice makes perfect!May you succeed!May you succeed!9、静夜四无邻，荒居旧业贫。2024/8/42024/8/4Sunday, August 4, 202410、雨中黄叶树，灯下白头人。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/2024 10:58:20 AM11、以我独沈久，愧君相见频。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/4Aug-2404-Aug-2412、故人江海别，几度隔山川。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/4Sunday, August 4, 202413、乍见翻疑梦，相悲各问年。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/202414、他乡生白发，旧国见青山。04 八月 20242024/8/42024/8/42024/8/415、比不了得就不比，得不到的就不要。八月 242024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/202416、行动出成果，工作出财富。2024/8/42024/8/404 August 202417、做前，能够环视四周；做时，你只能或者最好沿着以脚为起点的射线向前。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/42024/8/49、没有失败，只有暂时停止成功！。2024/8/42024/8/4Sunday, August 4, 202410、很多事情努力了未必有结果，但是不努力却什么改变也没有。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/2024 10:58:20 AM11、成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/4Aug-2404-Aug-2412、世间成事，不求其绝对圆满，留一份不足，可得无限完美。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/4Sunday, August 4, 202413、不知香积寺，数里入云峰。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/202414、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。04 八月 20242024/8/42024/8/42024/8/415、楚塞三湘接，荆门九派通。八月 242024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/202416、少年十五二十时，步行夺得胡马骑。2024/8/42024/8/404 August 202417、空山新雨后，天气晚来秋。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/42024/8/49、杨柳散和风，青山澹吾虑。2024/8/42024/8/4Sunday, August 4, 202410、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/2024 10:58:20 AM11、越是没有本领的就越加自命不凡。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/4Aug-2404-Aug-2412、越是无能的人，越喜欢挑剔别人的错儿。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/4Sunday, August 4, 202413、知人者智，自知者明。胜人者有力，自胜者强。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/202414、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。04 八月 20242024/8/42024/8/42024/8/415、最具挑战性的挑战莫过于提升自我。八月 242024/8/42024/8/42024/8/48/4/202416、业余生活要有意义，不要越轨。2024/8/42024/8/404 August 202417、一个人即使已登上顶峰，也仍要自强不息。2024/8/42024/8/42024/8/42024/8/4MOMODA POWERPOINTLorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Fusce id urna blandit, eleifend nulla ac, fringilla purus. Nulla iaculis tempor felis ut cursus. 感感 谢谢 您您 的的 下下 载载 观观 看看专家告诉