书面表达话题写作（四） 旅行交通篇【话题点睛】 旅游交通包含两个方面的话题:旅游和交通。旅游话题通常涉及景点介绍、旅游计划、行程安排、游记等;交通话题通常涉及个人出行方式、各种交通方式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关系等。有的中考作文会同时涉及这两个话题。典例分析注意(1)短文必须包含记录表中的信息,并作适当发挥;(2)文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息;(3)词数:80100,所给的文章开头仅供选择,不计入总词数。IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:文章主要围绕对“Atriptothecountrysideortothecity”展开,介绍两者的不同特点,并写出小组的选择与理由。表中要点已列出,具体如下:(1)开门见山:交代小组讨论的话题;(2)分开阐述:城市或农村各自的优缺点;(3)最后点题:权衡利弊,做出选择。2.确定时态:一般现在时【写作架构】【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.到农村郊游你可以通过钓鱼或游泳来放松你自己。(relaxoneself)Takingatriptothecountrysidecanbyor.2.在大商厦里来回走也是很激动人心的。(Its+adj.todosth.)Itsverybackandforthinlargemalls.3.我认为,我喜欢到农村旅游胜于到城市旅游。(preferto)Inmyopinion,Iatriptothecountrysideatriptothecity.relax yourselffishingswimmingexciting to travelpreferto.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)1.Yourefromthecountryside.Atriptothecityisbetter.(用if改为复合句)2.Youcanlieunderthestars,enjoyingthequietnight.(改为用and连接的简单句)3.Travelingcannotonlyhelpusseethebestsights.Travelingcanbroadenourmind.(用notonlybutalso改写句子)If youre from the countryside, a trip to the city is better.You can lie under the stars and enjoy the quiet night.Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also broaden our mind. 【连句成文】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Takingatriptothecountrysidecanrelaxyoubyfishingorswimming.Andthefreshairmightbeyourfavourite.Yet,youmightnothavemanychoicesintransportation.Ofcourse,atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifyoulikeshopping,itsveryexcitingtotravelbackandforthinlargemalls.Youcanvisitmuseumstobroadenyourmind.Neverthelesssuchatripmightcostmuch.Andthetrafficjammightletyoudown.Ifyourefromthecountryside,atriptothecityisbetter.There,youlllearnwhatyouveneverthoughtof.Inmyopinion,atriptothecountrysideisbetter.There,youcanlieunderthestars,enjoyingthequietnight.拓展积累【相关短语】enjoythesunshine享受阳光;oneofthebiggestmountains最大的山之一;haveapicnic野餐;aseveryoneknows众所周知;befamousfor因闻名;haveagoodtrip旅途愉快;havefundoingsth.做某事很有趣;haveagoodtime玩得愉快【参考谚语】1.Travelbroadensthemind.旅游开阔思维。2.Hewhotravelsfarknowsmore.远行者见识广。3.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.读万卷书,行万里路。【旅途经历】1.Yangzhoudishesmaybeone of the reasons why somanypeopleareattractedbythecity.2.When westayedthere,wegotlotsofhelpfromlocalpeople.Theywereveryfriendlytous.3.Only in this waycanyouenjoyyoursummerholidayhappily.4.It is said thatHawaiiismorebeautifulthan any otherplaceintheworld.【旅途收获】1.Travelingcan not onlyhelpusseethebestsightsbut also broadenoureyestotheoutsideworld.2.Travelingislikeastory.Wecan make friendswithothersandget helpandlove fromothers.3.Traveling is likeawar.实战演练A假如你是Lingling,学校根据下表中新西兰来温暑期交流师生的意愿,决定安排他们去100公里外的许村游玩一天。但自行车来回路程需要8-9小时,权衡利弊,需调整这项内容,请你发邮件给对方带队老师Mr.Black做好说明、沟通工作。要求(1)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(2)词数:110 左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。Dear Mr. Black,Im Lingling. My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preferences, but Im afraid well have to make some changes._Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes.LinglingOnepossibleversion:DearMr.Black,ImLingling.Myschoolaskedustomaketheone-daytourplanforyouandwetriedtomakeitbesttoyourpreferences,butImafraidwellhavetomakesomechanges.WellvisitamountainvillagecalledXucun,whichisveryfamousforitsoldhouses,fantasticsightsanddeliciousfood.Imsureyouwilllikeit.However,itwilltakeusabout8to9hourstogoandcomebackbybike.Evenifwesetoutat7:00a.m.,wellgetthereatabout11:30.Goingaroundthebeautiful,culturalplaces,includingsomeoldhousesallwithahistoryofover500years,willtakeusatleast2to3hours.Havinglunch(localfoodanddrinks)takesanotherhour.Whatsmore,itsveryhothereinsummer.Sowethinktakingabustherewillbeamuchbetterchoice.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes.LinglingB2017扬州 为了进一步提升扬州国际文化旅游名城新形象,我市正在举办中学生英语导游大赛。请根据以下流程图提示完成一篇参赛导游词。参考词汇SlenderWestLake瘦西湖Five-pavilionBridge五亭桥HeGarden何园double-pathcorridor复道回廊要求(1)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;(2)词数:100左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to Yangzhou! Im your tour guide. Yangzhou, my hometown, lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River._I hope youll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.Onepossibleversion:Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometoYangzhou!Imyourtourguide.Yangzhou,myhometown,liesbetweentheHuaiRiverandtheYangtzeRiver.Yangzhouhasahistoryofover2,500years.Therearemanyinterestingplacestovisit,suchasSlenderWestLake,Five-pavilionBridge,HeGarden,double-pathcorridorandChinaPaper-cuttingMuseum.SlenderWestLakeisanationalparkinYangzhouCity.TheFive-pavilionBridgeisthesymboloftheSlenderWestLake.HeGardenisthebest-knownprivategardenofthelateQingDynasty.ChinaPaper-cuttingMuseumisinYangzhou,too.Yangzhoupaper-cuttingcanbedatedbacktotheSuiDynasty.Yangzhoudishesmaybeoneofthereasonswhysomanypeopleareattractedbythecity.Theyarenotonlydeliciousbutalsocolorful.IhopeyoullhaveaverynicestayinYangzhou.