2006届高考英语考前辅导届高考英语考前辅导-书面表达书面表达06届考前辅导届考前辅导-书面表达书面表达A.精彩回放精彩回放B.友情提醒友情提醒C.亮点点拨亮点点拨精彩回放精彩回放A. A. 观点对比类文章观点对比类文章 B. B. 今昔对比类文章今昔对比类文章C. C. 数据说明类文章数据说明类文章D. D. 看图说话类文章看图说话类文章E. E. 提示议论文类文章提示议论文类文章高考英语书面表达评分要求高考英语书面表达评分要求v评分原则评分原则q先根据文章的先根据文章的内容内容和和语言语言初步确定其所属初步确定其所属档次档次,然后以该档次的然后以该档次的要求来衡量要求来衡量.确定或调确定或调整档次整档次,最后给分。最后给分。q评分时，应注意的主评分时，应注意的主要内容为：要内容为：内容要点内容要点、应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的数量和准确性及上的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。下文的连贯性。v第五档给分范围和要求第五档给分范围和要求 （21-25分）分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务完全完成了试题规定的任务q覆盖所有内容要求覆盖所有内容要求q应用了较多的语法结构和词应用了较多的语法结构和词汇汇q语法和结构方面有些许错误，语法和结构方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力的语言应用能力q有效的使用了语句间的连接有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑成分，使全文结构紧凑 完全达到了预期的写作目的完全达到了预期的写作目的精彩回放精彩回放A. 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语v总起总起: Different people hold different opinions. Opinions are divided. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question.v表达观点一表达观点一: of them hold the opinion that . of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for/against the idea think 精彩回放精彩回放v表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:vHowever, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. vPeople who are against it dont think so. vHowever, each coin has two sides. vDifferent from those., people think .vOn the other hand, people object that . 精彩回放精彩回放B. 表示今昔对比类写作套语表示今昔对比类写作套语v 1. 开头常用句型开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year. Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China. Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.(2) Things have begun to improve since 自从自从以来，事情有了好转以来，事情有了好转/改善。改善。Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.精彩回放精彩回放2. 对比常用句型对比常用句型: (1)used to, but now 过去常过去常，但是现在，但是现在(2) in the past, but now 在过去在过去，但是现在，但是现在(3) once, but now 曾经曾经.，但是现在，但是现在(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了情况已大不同了(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了但是现在全变了 精彩回放精彩回放C. 表示数据说明类写作套语表示数据说明类写作套语v 文章结构文章结构:Part 1: General idea (conclusion/ tendency ) Part 2 Facts: (to support the idea) Part 3 Reasons Part 4 Solutions or personal opinion/suggestions (if needed) 精彩回放精彩回放开头常用套语开头常用套语:The graph above shows that As is shown by the graph / in the chart, From the graph / chart above, we can see From the figures given in the table, it can be seen / noticed that 精彩回放精彩回放数据说明常用套语数据说明常用套语:The number of nearly doubled The number was 5 times as much as that of. It rose from It decreased twice than that of 1906.The total number was lowered by 10%.Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10%.The number of amount to/add up to/sum up to/reach (数量总计数量总计) increase (rise / fall / drop) from to ） Compared with make up about 精彩回放精彩回放原因说明常用套语原因说明常用套语:vThere are several reasons that account for it. vA number of factors account for .vThe change in. largely results from the fact that.vFirstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . Secondly, . Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover,. Finally/ Last but not least/, . 精彩回放精彩回放结尾常用套语结尾常用套语:We can draw the conclusion thatIn my opinion/Personally, As far as Im concerned, In short/ in brief/ in a word, It seems clear that Its clear from the chart thatWe can know/learn thatThe results seem to suggest that D. D. 看图说话类文章看图说话类文章E. E. 提示议论文类文章提示议论文类文章友情提醒友情提醒 看图作文写作应考虑的几点看图作文写作应考虑的几点 1. 看懂图片，把图片展示的人物、地点、看懂图片，把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。为内容连贯的句子。2. 确定短文的时态和人称。确定短文的时态和人称。3. 确定体裁（说明文还是记叙文），接确定体裁（说明文还是记叙文），接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。4. 根据图片或图表大意进行议论。根据图片或图表大意进行议论。 D. 看图说话类写作看图说话类写作 友情提醒友情提醒1.1. walk in a park with my walk in a park with my younger brotheryounger brother2.2. see some foreigners see some foreigners3.3. say “Good night!” say “Good night!”4.4. replied “Good evening!” replied “Good evening!”5.5. felt puzzled felt puzzled 6.6. look up in the look up in the reference bookreference book7.7. misuse the phrase misuse the phrase “Good night”“Good night”8.8. be determined to be determined to study English harderstudy English harder9.9. never make the same never make the same mistake againmistake again I thought English was easy to learn. I thought English was easy to learn. However, what happened to me this evening However, what happened to me this evening changed my idea.changed my idea. This evening I was walking in a park with This evening I was walking in a park with my younger brother my younger brother when when we saw some we saw some foreigners coming towards us. foreigners coming towards us. To be polite,To be polite, I I greeted them, saying “Good night!” greeted them, saying “Good night!” To my To my surprise,surprise, one of them replied “Good one of them replied “Good evening!” rather than “Good night”. evening!” rather than “Good night”. Why did Why did she say “Good evening” instead of “Good she say “Good evening” instead of “Good night”?night”? What was the difference between them?What was the difference between them? I felt puzzled.I felt puzzled. The momentThe moment we got back home, I couldnt we got back home, I couldnt wait to look them up in the reference book. wait to look them up in the reference book. Not until thenNot until then did I realize I had misused the did I realize I had misused the phrase “Good night”.phrase “Good night”. How ashamed I felt!How ashamed I felt! Thus, Im determined to study English harder Thus, Im determined to study English harder and never make the same mistake again.and never make the same mistake again.增加开头内容增加开头内容, ,采用倒叙手法采用倒叙手法使文章前后呼使文章前后呼应应, ,整体完整整体完整增添心理活动增添心理活动使用多种句型使用多种句型 提示议论文写作应考虑的几点提示议论文写作应考虑的几点 1. 文章开头，能依据提示确立主题句文章开头，能依据提示确立主题句（topic）, 阐明观点或看法。阐明观点或看法。 2. 使用连接词使用连接词, 分层次说明理由、缘分层次说明理由、缘由（由（supporting sentences）。）。 3. 归纳总结，首尾呼应。归纳总结，首尾呼应。 D. 提示议论文类写作提示议论文类写作 友情提醒友情提醒谈谈阅读的好处：谈谈阅读的好处：1 1）阅读对人有很大好处；）阅读对人有很大好处；2 2）读书给我们带来很大乐趣；）读书给我们带来很大乐趣；3 3）书是我们最好的朋友。）书是我们最好的朋友。Reading does a lot of good to human beings.We can enjoy the great pleasures that reading gives us.Books are our best friends. 半开放式书面表达半开放式书面表达半开放式书面表达半开放式书面表达1. 1. 按照提示，写出主题句。按照提示，写出主题句。友情提醒友情提醒Reading does a lot of good to human beings. We can enjoy the great pleasures that reading gives us.Books are our best friends. For one thing, reading can enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizons.Besides, we can share the writers ideas and communicate with him who lived long ago. For another thing, we can talk about the book that we have read. This helps us make friends with other people. 2. 2. 根据主题句，确定根据主题句，确定supporting details.supporting details. On the one hand, On the one hand, ,reading can enrich our knowledge reading can enrich our knowledge and widen our eyesight.and widen our eyesight. When we read at home we can When we read at home we can travel around the world and understand the things travel around the world and understand the things around us clearly.around us clearly. MeanwhileMeanwhile, , we can share the writers we can share the writers ideas and communicateideas and communicate with him who lived long ago.with him who lived long ago. On the other hand,On the other hand, we can talk about the book that we we can talk about the book that we have read.have read. This helps us make friends with other people. This helps us make friends with other people. Therefore, those who can enjoy books can get much Therefore, those who can enjoy books can get much happiness from books.happiness from books. Reading does a lot of good to human beings.Reading does a lot of good to human beings. Many Many people like reading books in their spare time. It has people like reading books in their spare time. It has become part of their lives.become part of their lives. Generally speaking,Generally speaking, books are our best friends. books are our best friends. Reading good books should become our life-long hobby.Reading good books should become our life-long hobby.3. 3. 串联串联supporting details, supporting details, 添加必要细节。添加必要细节。v1、 细节的添加要为主题服务。细节的添加要为主题服务。v2、要使用自己有把握的句型和短语。、要使用自己有把握的句型和短语。v3、主题思想不宜挖掘得太深。、主题思想不宜挖掘得太深。v4、表达尽量要简洁、不宜罗嗦。、表达尽量要简洁、不宜罗嗦。友情提醒友情提醒A A、运用高级词汇、运用高级词汇B B、增加形容词或副词、增加形容词或副词C C、灵活运用各种句型、灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨亮点点拨一. 运用高级词汇1.这件事情挺难的。This is a challenging job.2. 我们就会了解父母的辛苦工作。Well then know about parents hardship.3. 这有助于我们学会节俭。This helps us learn to be thrifty.亮点点拨亮点点拨高级词汇举例:significanthardshipavailablecontactdemandingrelativelywastefulfrequent亮点点拨亮点点拨二.增加形容词或副词1.在我们的校园里有一个小池塘。2. 如果父母的收入较好,There lies a lovely pond in our beautiful campus.If their parents have a relatively high income,.亮点点拨亮点点拨表示程度的副词举例hardlyseldomrarelymerelyrelativelyslightlya bitpartlycompletely亮点点拨亮点点拨 置于句首的副词1. 这极有可能使孩子养成依赖父母的习惯。2. 尤其当父母有足够的钱养家时，。Probably this will make the children develop the habit of living on parents.Especially when their parents have enoughmoney to support the family,. 亮点点拨亮点点拨句首副词举例strangelyfrequentlyespeciallyunbelievablyunexpectedlysurprisinglybesides亮点点拨亮点点拨三. 灵活运用各种句型1.插入语然而, 其他同学持有不同意见。 The other students, however, hold a different view.另外，他们会以为将来可以依赖父母。Besides, theyll think they can rely on their parents in the future.亮点点拨亮点点拨2. It 句型我们期望今年有个好收成。我们期望今年有个好收成。It is expected that there will be a good harvest.30%学生认为无必要让孩子知道父母的收入。30% of the students think it unnecessary to let children know how much their parents earn.亮点点拨亮点点拨3. with 结构作业做完了，那个男孩出去玩了。With the homework finished, the boy went out to play.有了父母可依赖，他们就不再努力学习了。Theyll not study hard any more, with rich parents to depend on.亮点点拨亮点点拨4.分词短语30%同学不赞同这一看法， 认为孩子不应当。30% of my classmates disagree with it, saying children shouldnt.知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。Knowing this, theyll study harder and harder.亮点点拨亮点点拨5.从句他所做的一切使我们很失望。（主语从句）What he did disappointed us all. 我们应当知道父母的收入，因为这有助于我们理解他们的艰辛。（状语从句）We should know parents income,because itll help us understand how hard they have to work.亮点点拨亮点点拨6. 倒装句型我们只有努力学习才能为社会作出自己的贡献.Only by working hard can we make our contributions to our society in the future. 只有当我们意识到互相帮助的重要性,我们才能致力于建设一个和谐社会.Only when we realize the importance of helping each other can we be devoted to building a harmonious society. 亮点点拨亮点点拨7. 强调句型 当他到家以后才知道发生了什么事情.It was not until he got home that he knew what had happened. 是他让我懂得了什么才是真正的互相帮助.It was he that taught me what helping each other really meant. 亮点点拨亮点点拨9、静夜四无邻，荒居旧业贫。2024/8/132024/8/13Tuesday, August 13, 202410、雨中黄叶树，灯下白头人。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/2024 12:43:22 PM11、以我独沈久，愧君相见频。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/13Aug-2413-Aug-2412、故人江海别，几度隔山川。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/13Tuesday, August 13, 202413、乍见翻疑梦，相悲各问年。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/202414、他乡生白发，旧国见青山。13 八月 20242024/8/132024/8/132024/8/1315、比不了得就不比，得不到的就不要。八月 242024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/202416、行动出成果，工作出财富。2024/8/132024/8/1313 August 202417、做前，能够环视四周；做时，你只能或者最好沿着以脚为起点的射线向前。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/132024/8/139、没有失败，只有暂时停止成功！。2024/8/132024/8/13Tuesday, August 13, 202410、很多事情努力了未必有结果，但是不努力却什么改变也没有。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/2024 12:43:22 PM11、成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/13Aug-2413-Aug-2412、世间成事，不求其绝对圆满，留一份不足，可得无限完美。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/13Tuesday, August 13, 202413、不知香积寺，数里入云峰。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/202414、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。13 八月 20242024/8/132024/8/132024/8/1315、楚塞三湘接，荆门九派通。八月 242024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/202416、少年十五二十时，步行夺得胡马骑。2024/8/132024/8/1313 August 202417、空山新雨后，天气晚来秋。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/132024/8/139、杨柳散和风，青山澹吾虑。2024/8/132024/8/13Tuesday, August 13, 202410、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/2024 12:43:22 PM11、越是没有本领的就越加自命不凡。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/13Aug-2413-Aug-2412、越是无能的人，越喜欢挑剔别人的错儿。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/13Tuesday, August 13, 202413、知人者智，自知者明。胜人者有力，自胜者强。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/202414、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。13 八月 20242024/8/132024/8/132024/8/1315、最具挑战性的挑战莫过于提升自我。八月 242024/8/132024/8/132024/8/138/13/202416、业余生活要有意义，不要越轨。2024/8/132024/8/1313 August 202417、一个人即使已登上顶峰，也仍要自强不息。2024/8/132024/8/132024/8/132024/8/13MOMODA POWERPOINTLorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. 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