How to write a wonderful compositionNeijiang No.1 Middle School By He Chunmei（内江一中（内江一中 何春梅）何春梅） 你现在是一名中学生，最近学习紧张繁重，你和部分同学觉你现在是一名中学生，最近学习紧张繁重，你和部分同学觉得身心疲惫。得身心疲惫。 应该怎样调节呢？请根据应该怎样调节呢？请根据下面的信息提示写一篇短文，开头已经给出。下面的信息提示写一篇短文，开头已经给出。信息提示信息提示：要求要求: : 根据根据 , ,适当发挥适当发挥, ,不逐字翻译。词数在不逐字翻译。词数在 。 I am a middle school student . Many of my classmates feel tired and nervous these days. Here I have some advice. 人称人称第一人称第一人称时态时态 1. 1.平衡饮食平衡饮食 2.2.参加运动参加运动 3.3.充足睡眠充足睡眠 1.1.平衡饮食平衡饮食 2.2.参加运动参加运动3.3.充足睡眠充足睡眠 信息提示信息提示, ,把握要点把握要点8080词左右词左右信息提示信息提示, ,把握要点把握要点8080词左右词左右要点要点Task：一般现在时一般现在时三个加适当发挥三个加适当发挥文体文体 记叙文记叙文Step one : 审题审题(Analyze) 你认为你认为你和你的同学们你和你的同学们 正文正文1.1.平衡饮食平衡饮食 2. 参加运动参加运动3.3.充足睡眠充足睡眠 eat a balanced diet take exerciseget enough sleep？ ？Step two：列提纲：列提纲(list)eat a balanced diethealthy foodunhealthy foodstay away from junk food.junk foodbad for our healthhealthy food good for our healtheat more healthy food howeatdont eat take exerciseplay basketballplay tennisplay soccertake a walkswimkeep healthy make us active and energeticIts necessary for us to take exercise. get enough sleep need eight hours sleephowdont stay up latego to bed early and get up earlyIf we dont get enough sleep, we willhave a headachefeel tired the next day.orStep three：连接：连接(connect)1. _a balanced diet, for example we can eat more healthy food.2. Eating junk food _our health.3. _ build up (增增强强) our bodies，help us to keep healthy.4. Junk food _ us fat and _.5. Its important _. _stay up late.We should haveis bad forDoing exercise canmakesweakto get enough sleep Youd better not make sentences:points how examples whyeat a balanced diet1.eat more2.stay away from junk foodmilk1.good for health 2.make us fat and weaktakeexercisedo sportstake a walkmake us activeget enough sleepneed enough sleepdont stay up latego to bed early 1. bad for health2. If we dont Conjunction words :1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示条件表示条件: if ，unless 3.表示顺序表示顺序: first , next，then, finally 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so 5.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror 6.表示解释表示解释: for example, such as 7.表示转折表示转折: but, however, yet 8.表示结论表示结论: in a word, at last, all in all Fill in the blanks with the words given :Fill in the blanks with the words given :1._ we are busy with study, we have to find some time to exercise.2.We can do kinds of sports _ swimming, running _ hiking.3._, we should eat more vegetables and fruit. _,its necessary to take exercise.4._we dont get enough sleep, well have a headache the next day._ wed better not stay up late.if, first, so, although, such as, second, andAlthoughFirstsuch asSecondIfSoandStep four：美化：美化(Beautify)write your composition:points how examples whyeat a balanced diet1.eat more2.stay away from junk foodmilk1.good for health 2.make us fat and weaktakeexercisedo sportstake a walkmake us activeget enough sleep1.need enough sleep2.dont stay up latego to bed early 1. bad for health2. If we dont Step five：检查：检查(Check)Check the following:v要点是否全面v逻辑是否合理v人称是否正确v时态是否正确v语序是否正确v主谓是否一致v语言是否符合习惯 I am a middle school student. Many of my classmates feel tired and nervous these days. Here I have some advice. Firstly, we should have a balanced diet. Vegetables and fruit are good for our health. Besides, stay away from junk food, it makes us fat and weak. Secondly, its necessary to take exercise. Doing exercise can make us active and energetic. Finally, we need at least eight hours sleep every night. If we dont get enough sleep, we will feel tired the next day. So wed better not stay up late. I hope all of us can both do well in our study and care for our health.One possible version：Summary: Writing steps:1.1.审题审题(analyze)(analyze)2.2.列提纲列提纲(list)(list)3.3.连接连接(connect)(connect)4.4.美化美化(beautify)(beautify)5.5.检查检查(check)(check)（人称，时态，文体，要点，要求）（人称，时态，文体，要点，要求）（核心词汇（核心词汇, ,短语）短语）（将核心词汇（将核心词汇, ,短语整理成句）短语整理成句）( (恰当运用关联词句恰当运用关联词句, ,美化文章美化文章) )（查拼写，要点，标点）（查拼写，要点，标点）1. Winners never quit and quitters never win. 2.Be confident.3. Practice makes better.Homework假设你校英语报假设你校英语报English Star为学生开设了一个专栏：谈谈你为学生开设了一个专栏：谈谈你的一个坏习惯。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向报社的一个坏习惯。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向报社投稿。投稿。(1) 你的坏习惯是什么你的坏习惯是什么?(2) 产生该坏习惯的原因是什么产生该坏习惯的原因是什么?(3) 该习惯产生的不良后果是什么该习惯产生的不良后果是什么?（写两点）（写两点）(4) 你打算如何改掉这个坏习惯你打算如何改掉这个坏习惯? 要求：要求：(1) 所写内容必须包括以上要点；所写内容必须包括以上要点；(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；(3) 内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；(4) 80词左右；词左右；(5) 题目已写好，不计入总词数。题目已写好，不计入总词数。Best wishes for you! Thank you for listening!May 30th 2018