,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,*,写作技巧点拨系列,(,五,),完美衔接过渡,巧妙起承转合,【,核心点拨,】,高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准要求“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”,;,而最低档次的评分标准则标明“缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯”。这些都提醒考生,要想在高考有限的时间里写出能获得较高分数的书面表达,就必须应用恰当的衔接过渡词汇来使句子、段落之间的衔接通顺自然,达到内容连贯,文章结构紧凑的目的。从而避免结构松散,层次不明,表意不清等弊端。,一、语句间常用的衔接过渡词汇,表起始,first of all;according to;in my opinion;as far as I am concerned;as far as I know;as for me,表递进,besides;whats more;whats worse;furthermore;in addition to;additionally,表并列,also;as well(as);or;either.or.;neither.nor.;not only.but also;both.and,表因果,therefore;thanks to;as a result of.;because of;due to;owing to,表强调,above all;indeed;surely;certainly;of course;at least;obviously,表解释,that is to say;in other words;believe it or not;to tell you the truth;namely;actually,表比较,just as;just like;in the same way;similarly,表空间,on the left/right;to the left/right;on one side of.on the other side of.;at the foot/top/end of;in the middle/center of.,表时间,at first;in the beginning;next;then;later;about two months later;after a while;soon;soon after that;after that;afterwards;since then;meanwhile;in the end;at last;finally;for the first time;the next moment;up to now;before long;from then on;sooner or later,表转折,或对比,however;on the other hand;on the contrary;in spite of;after all;in fact;as a matte of fact,表列举,for one thing.and for another(thing);first;firstly;second(ly);third(ly);last but not least,表举例,for example;for instance;take.for example;such as;as follows;and so on,表总结,in short;in a word;in conclusion;in brief;generally speaking;to sum up;all in all,二、段落间常用的衔接过渡词汇,文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成,在修辞中称为起、承、转、合。“起”就是开头,“,承”是承接,“,转”是转折,“,合”是综合或总结。,用于“起”的过渡词汇,(,用在段落或文章的开头,),first,first of all,at first,in the first place,firstly,to begin with,to start with,recently,now,at present,in recent years,in general,lately,currently,用于“承”的过渡词汇,(,用在段落中的第一个扩展句中,),second,similarly,in addition,besides,then,furthermore,moreover,what is more,what is worse,for example,for instance,certainly,surely,obviously,in other words,especially,particularly,in particular,indeed,still,third,truly,in fact,at the same time,no doubt,用于“转”的过渡词汇,(,用在段落中的第二个,扩展句中,),but,however,on the other hand,on the contrary,in contrast,in any case,nevertheless(,虽然如此,),otherwise,or,or else,while,whereas,but,in spite of.,yet,instead,用于“合”的过渡词汇,(,用在段落的结论句或,文章的结论段中,),in a word,in general,in short,above all,after all,generally speaking,to sum up,finally,in conclusion,at last,in summary,therefore,as a result,thus,eventually,hence,on the whole,【,即时应用,】,下面是一篇题为“,Haste makes waste(,欲速则不达,)”,的文章,请根据提示填写出恰当的过渡词以确保语篇连贯。,Haste makes waste,There is an old saying,“Haste makes waste.”Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct and of great importance in many cases even today.,(,表顺序,)it teaches us that we shouldnt be overanxious about quick results.,(,表转折,)we will fail.,(,表递进,)if we emphasize too much upon speed,we will suffer sooner or later.,(,表举例,)if we are too hasty in tests,it is very possible that we may make some mistakes or even fail.,(,表递进,)we may leave a bad impression on both the teachers and classmates that we are careless.,(,再次举例,)if a sportsman is hasty in an important game,he may lose a very precious opportunity to win the championship.,(,表结果,)he,will lose the confidence to pick the pieces up.Haste has many side effects.On the one hand,haste may result in wrong decision or more mistakes.,(,表列举,)haste means a failure or an accident in some important occasion.,(,表总结,)whatever we do,do pay attention to the balance of the speed and quality.,答案,:,Firstly,Otherwise,In addition,For example/For instance,Whats more,For another example,As a result,On the other hand,In conclusion/In a word,