台州市2020年4月高三年级教学质量评估试题英语续写评讲课件以及范文-byLance(兰银清)读后续写：Freddie woke up to see it was snowing again. The worldoutsidewaswhite.Snowcoveredtheroads,thecars,thehouses,andeventhedrivewayFreddiehadjustshoveledthedaybefore.“Ugh,”saidFreddie.“Notmoresnow!”Hegotoutofbedandheadedtothebathroomforhisregularmorningshower.Ashereachedforthetaps,hismotherappearedinthedoorway.“Ive got news,” she said. “Theres been so much snowovernightthattheroadsareslipperyanddangerous.Ijustheardontheradiothattheycanceledtheschoolbusesfortheday.”Freddie groaned. “Then how am I supposed to get toschool?”Hismomgrinned.“Iguessyoudont.Itsasnowday!”Freddies eyes lit up. Hed never had a snow day offfromschoolbefore.Whatwouldhedofirst?“Im going back to bed!” Freddie headed back to hisroomandclimbedunderthecovers.Afterafewminutes,he realized that it was too late. He was already wideawake.Heheadeddowntothekitchenwherehefoundhisfathercookingbaconandeggs.Hisfathersmiled.“Sinceweareallstayinghometoday,Ithoughtwedhaveanicehotbreakfasttogether.”Freddienoddedinagreement.Normally,thefamilywasrushingtogetoutontime,soheusuallyjustatesomecerealandabananaonschooldays.Hesatatthetableandwatchedhisfatherfliptheeggsoverinthepan.Hismotherpouredjuiceandcoffeeandjoinedthem.Itwasrelaxing,thoughtFreddie.Afterbreakfasthismothersuggestedhegooutandbuildasnowman.Freddiewasnttoosure.Hedidntreallylikethecoldandthesnow.Hedratherstayinsideandplayvideogames.“Youcanplayafter,buthowaboutyougooutsideforalittlebit?Itsgoodtogetsomefreshair,andwhoknows,youmightevenenjoyyourself.”Hismotherhandedhimascarf,hat,andmitts.Freddiereluctantlyputonthewarmclothesandheadedoutside.Standingaloneinthefrontyard,withthecoldwindblowing,wasnotFreddiesideaofagoodtime.Knowinghismommeantwhatshesaid,theboysighed,thinkingthe quicker he completed his snowman, the faster hecouldgobackinsidetohisvideogames.Hesettoworkpackingupsomesnowintoalargeball.Moments later, he saw one of his friends emergingfromhishouseupthestreet.Dionwaddledoutinhissnowpantsandheavyovercoat.HewavedtoFreddie.Heythere!Isawyououthereandthoughtyoumightwant company. Snow days are awesome!” Dionlaughed.Freddiewassurprisedbuthappytoseehisclassmate._Delighted at the idea , Freddie ran into hishouse._读思写方法作文一）读要处理的问题1.理清人物关系(并了解人物特征)Debbie,mom,dad,Dion(classmate)2.理清故事情节the school was canceled because of snow Debbiewanted to play video games at home but his motherwantedhimtoplayoutsidereluctantlyDebbieheadedoutsidehewantedtocompletethesnowmanquicklyandthenwentbacktoplaycomputervideos.3.分析语言特点:生动(vivid)、形象(visualized)二）思要处理的问题1.文章的主题：life2.划线词归类characters:Debbie,mom,Dion(classmate)time/place:outsideactions:realizedplayemotions:relaxing,agoodtimeothers:snowman，company3.根据已知人物关系，故事发展情节，所给两段落的首句，划线词预测故事情节的发展。可以通过提问的方式预测故事情节的发展Freddiewassurprisedbuthappytoseehisclassmate.1.DidDebbieaskDiontohelphimbuildthesnowman?2.Howdidtheybuildthesnowman?Howdidtheyfeel?3.Whatwastheidea?Whoseidea?Delightedattheidea,Freddieranintohishouse.1.WhydidFreddierunintohishouse?2.WhatdidFreddiedonext?3.DidFreddiechangehisideaofagoodtime?Howdidhismotherfeel?4.叙述和描写的方式A:叙述：顺序，倒叙，插叙，补叙此续写是顺序（一般都是顺序哈）B:需要心理描写吗？需要对话吗？此续写可以有心理描写，也可以没有。此续写对话可以有，但是要少而精（一般来说续写的对话要少而精）。5.思考一个恰当的结尾记叙文或者小说的结尾方式很多。根据具体文章以及自己写作最擅长的方式，可以采用余味悠长，回味无穷的方式结尾；也可以采用升华主题的方式结尾；还可以采用寄情于景，定格画面的方式结尾等等。此续写可以考虑余味悠长、回味无穷的方式结尾三）写作过程中处理的问题写是在“读和思”有效进行后，具体写作的一个综合的过程。1.续写的第一段要和前文要有效衔接，第二段要和第一段有效衔接。尤其要注意续写的第一段不能和原文脱节，也不能重复原文内容。第二段不能和第一段脱节，也不能第二段重复续写第一段的内容。2续写的段落要和续写首句有效衔接，衔接的方式有主要有三种：1)与首句主语衔接2)与首句宾语衔接3）与首句逻辑衔接范文：台州2020年4月续写范文（-byLance兰银清）Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.“Yeah, sure. Help me make this snowman, would you?”Dionnodded,andtheygottowork,buildingthesnowmanasolidbaseandliftingaheavysnowballontopofit.Dionfoundsomestonesforbuttons,andFreddiestuckacoupleofbrokenbranchesintothebodytomakearms.Finally,the snowman was finished! Then，they stood back toadmiretheirwork,exhaustedandred-cheekedbutexcitedandhappy.Suddenly,Dionsaid,“Hey,Iknowwhatwecandonext!”HetoldFreddiehisideaandFreddiegrinned.Freddieranintothehouse.Hismommethimatthedoor.SeeingsnowfullofDebbiesfaceandovercoat，shecouldnthelplaughing.“Areyoureadytocomein?”sheasked.“Notyet,Mom!”Freddiesaid.Stillexcited,heaskedhismotherifhecouldgototheparkwithDionandgosleddingdownthehill.KnowingDebbiewould rather enjoy himself outside than play videogamesathome,hismotheragreedwithouthesitation,withherfaceshininglikeadiamond.“Snowdaysarethebest!”Freddieyelledasheranofftoplaywithhisfriend-Dion.