大学英语大学英语B B网络统考考前辅导网络统考考前辅导写作与翻译写作与翻译写写 作作 介介 绍绍考生应能在30分钟内写出长度不少于80词的常见应用文及一般的叙述文、说明文和议论文。考生应能用较正确的语法、词汇、拼写、标点进行表达；基本做到内容切题，结构严谨，条理清楚；根据不同的写作目的进行有针对性的写作。第六部分：写作第六部分：写作 （满分（满分1515分）分） 要求你在要求你在3030分钟内，根据下面所给的题目用英语写分钟内，根据下面所给的题目用英语写出一篇不少于出一篇不少于8080词的短文。词的短文。My Plan for the May 1st Holiday评分标准： 以考试大纲写作部分的有关要求为依据，一般从作文的内容和语言质量两个角度评定。内容包括是否切题，思想是否清楚，意义是否连贯；语言包括所采用的句型以及词语是否准确，表达是否有误等。除以上两个标准外，还需注意所写文章的字数，要达到考试规定的字数要求。作文评分标准：大学英语B的作文考试评卷原则是在整体评阅的基础上给出印象分，此印象分以奖励给分，不是按错扣分。评分按档次进行，即1-3分，4-6分，7-9分，10-12分，13-15分五个档次。各个档次的具体描述如下：13-15分：扣题，语言流畅，用词丰富，篇章结构感强，语法正确，只有个别小错。 10-12分：扣题，语言通顺，用词较丰富，段与段之间有较好的过渡，语法基本正确，有些语病；7-9分：基本扣题，语言基本正确，用词有一定变化，文中错误较多，有个别为严重错误；4-6分：语言基本功差，文章中中国式英语表达居多，用词贫乏，语法错误相当多，有多处严重错误。1-3分：语言支离破碎，绝大部分句子无法理解，语言错误很多。 1. He likes all kinds of sports, but most of all, basketball. 2. He doesnt spend much time on his homework.3. Can you absorb all the knowledge our teacher gave in the class?4. Adam is slightly older than Tom.5. His English was adequate enough for the job, although he was not very fluent. 6. Her eyes were immediately filled with tears of gratitude.7. All flights to New York today were delayed because of the bad weather. 8. The best way to lose weight is to avoid eating fatty foods. 9. I hope we will remain friends forever.10. You wont get the job unless youve got the experience. 11. This is a cruel practice which should be stopped immediately. 12. You cant leave the city now; all the roads are blocked by snow.1.There + be1) There are many things to be done. / There are many things that we can do. 2) There have been great changes here in recent years.3) There are a variety of measures that we can take to protect our environment.2. Not (Never) until / tillWe do not know the value of health until we lose it.3. It is (for sb.) to doIt is impossible (for you) to master a foreign language in a few months. 4. It is true that, butIt is true that the computer has changed our lives, but it has brought about many problems as well. 5. AsAs we all know, / As is known to us all, smoking is harmful not only to the smokers but also to the non-smokers. 6. As long as There will be nothing to regret as/so long as we have tried our best. 7. Now thatNow that we have realized the importance of time, we should take fuller advantage of it. 注意事项注意事项: :1) 保证写作的时间。2) 认真审题,仔细构思,草拟大纲。3）注意文章的启、承、转、合。4）尽量使用一些标准的句型和成语，避免生造硬套。5）注意文章的总体布局和书写格式。6）正确使用标点符号。7）认真检查。8）书写一定要认真。网络统考英语命题作文包括：应用文及一般的叙述文、说明文和议论文：书信：公务信件跟私人信件公务信件：单位与单位或单位与个人之间的书信来往，包括推荐信、谋职信、入学申请书、邀请信或询问、答复、反映意见等等信件；私人信件：亲朋好友之间的通信；英文信件一般由以下六部分组成：信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结尾、签名。信头：信头：发信人的地址和日期，通常写在第一页的右上角，行首可以齐头写，也可进行缩进去写，行尾可用也可不用标点符号；书写地址：书写地址：由小到大；门牌号码、街道、城市、省(州)、邮编、国名，最后写发信日期Eg. “ZhongShanRoad, Hong San District, Xuzhou, Jiangsu, 221053, China, May 12, 1999 学校地址：English Department, Shanxi Teachers University, Sian, Shan Xi, 710062, P.R.C., March 1, 1995 信内地址信内地址: :写收信人的姓名和地址,写在写信日期下一行的左上角，格式与寄信人地址一样.称呼：称呼：与左边线对齐，写在收信人姓名、地址下面1-2行处；英国人称呼后用逗号，美国人常用冒号；Eg. Dear Professor/ Prof. Smith:/Dear Dr. Stein:/Dear Ms. Santos: 对不认识的人要按性别称呼: Dear Sir:/Dear Madam:/Dear ladies: 正文正文: :正文是书信的主体，书信的选词造句要准确、严谨，语言规范、简洁。书信正文的开头往往要说明写信人的身份及写信的宗旨，然后提出写信人的情况、想法或要求，加以必要的解释或说明。 结尾结尾: :公务信件公务信件: “Yours truly”, “Yours sincerely”, “Sincerely yours”, “Cordially yours”, “Yours cordially” 私人信件私人信件:“Yours sincere1y”, “Yours truly”, “Yours faithfully” College of Mechanical EngineeringUniversity of Petroleum ChinaDongying, ShandongPeoples Republic of ChinaDec. 5, 2009ChairmanDepartment of Mechanical EngineeringUniversity of ArizonaTueson, Arizona 85721U.S.A.Dear Sir,信头与称呼 I am a senior in the College of Mechanical Engineering of the University of Petroleum China. As an undergraduate, I specialize in fluid-dynamics and would like to continue studying it as a graduate student. Could you send me more information on your department and an application for admission? Although I will be receiving government support, I would still like to apply for financial aid. Could you please send me this application form as well? Thank you very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Li Huaming正 文结尾与签名如果给熟人写信，信头和信内地址可以免写，用词很随便，如：如果给熟人写信，信头和信内地址可以免写，用词很随便，如： September 13, 1987 Dear Brother, I have so many things to tell you that I hardly know where to begin. Now the first thing I want to tell you is that I have been so fortunate as to study in such a wonderful city and such a lovely college. In the first few days after I came here, there was so much to see and do and enjoy that I could not concentrate on anything but having fun and being happy.Last Monday school began. My teachers are kind and amiable. But I find that my lessons are much more difficult than they were in the middle school. However, I shall never dread them as I can work hard. Please take good care of Father and Mother and give my love to everybody at home. Your sister, Li Min书信常用结构书信常用结构 January 12th, 2006 Dear: I am . I am sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to talk about . (I am most happy to receive your letter and hear that ) I am looking forward to your reply. Best regards. Sincerely yours, 书信常用经典句型：书信常用经典句型： January 12th, 2006一、询问信1.We learn something from /We learn from that 2.Your company enjoys a good reputation in this line.3.Your company specializes in (专门经营)4.We would like you to send me /We would appreciate it if you will let us know (the ruling price of the goods 这个产品的现行价) 5.We look forward to receiving your early/favorable reply. Best Wishes/Best Regards! Yours Sincerely 书信常用经典句型：书信常用经典句型： January 12th, 2006二、道歉信1.I am writing this letter to make an apology to you for my 2.I am sorry for any inconvenience caused to you, please accept my sincere apology.三、致谢信1.Thank you for cooperation/confidence/sharing your suggestion2.I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for 3.I appreciate your cooperation and look forward to receiving 4. Best Wishes/Best Regards! Yours Sincerely 经典语句经典语句1.I am delighted to learn that2.I am sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to talk about3.I am most happy to receive your June 16th letter and hear that4.I am writing to tell you that5.I would like to apply for the position ofyou have advertised in6.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. (to seeing you in my hometown)7.Best regards. / Please give my love to8. Please accept my sincere thanks / apologies. August 25, 2004 Dear Xiao Lin, I am very pleased to learn that you have successfully passed the National Entrance Examination for Colleges and Universities this year and have been admitted to the Beijing University with honors. Allow me to offer my most sincere congratulations on this happy occasion. From our communication in the past, I can see that you have all along been working hard at your professional studies, excelling in almost all the subjects. Your success serves to show that diligence can yield good results. My family encourage me to follow your example. Though we havent seen each other for a long time, I bet well have the chance. Someday Ill go to Beijing to see you. Wish you greater achievements in your college education. Cordially yours, Xiao Ming August 25, 2004 Dear Lin Hai, You have no idea what a thrill your note gave me. My best friend is getting married, and I cant wait to see who is the lucky girl! You know how much I think of you, and how many good wishes I am sending along right now. Yes, indeed, Ill certainly be at your wedding, and at the reception, too. I wouldnt miss a minute of the occasion, and while there Ill hope to be brought up to date on the news of our classmates at college. Its so long since I saw any of you. I had hoped to visit you long ago, but one thing after another interfered with my plans. Please give my greetings to your girlfriend. Ill be seeing you soon. Sincerely yours Li Bing Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet1）有人认为因特网有很多的优势2）也有人认为因特网存在很多缺点3）我认为提示，写作文之前要认真研究题目所给提示Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Nowadays, the Internet is playing a more and more important role in peoples daily life. However, peoples opinions are still divided on this point. Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines. Secondly, we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and Yahoo Messenger. Last but no least, we can take part in groups or mailing lists to talk with friends of the same interest. Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that disadvantages are obvious. In the first place, the Internet costs considerable time, money and energy especially for those with less self-control. In the second place, surfing on the Internet for a long time harms the eyes a lot. Finally, more and more young people are indulged in online games, Internet chat and even pornography, which are extremely harmful to their future development. All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pro outweigh the cons. The past twenty years witnessed the fast development of the Internet along with national economy. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet. My View on Opportunity1）不同的人对于机遇有不同的看法2）我的观点My View on Opportunity Different people have different view on opportunity. Some people think that there are few opportunities in the world, while others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe opportunities are everywhere around us. No person will be unlucky enough to have no opportunities all the time, because “every dog has his day”. For another, since opportunities are transient, we have to make good preparations and improve ourselves. Just think of Newton, who discovered the Law of Gravity when many people had watched an apple falling ahead of him. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there are quite a few opportunities in our society. Only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by, just as the saying goes, “Opportunities are only for the prepared minds”. My Plan for the Spring Festival Spring festival is the most important festival for Chinese people. Many people will prepare many things for the spring festival. Now this is my plan for the spring festival. The first, I will visit my friends and my relatives. The second, I will make a big snow man with my daughter and my wife. The third, I will stay with my parents, because I have no more time to stay with them at peacetime. This is my plan for the spring festival. I hope all of you have a good time in the spring festival. About TelevisionTelevision has its good as well as bad sides. It makes us informed of daily news, lets us know the outside world, provides lessons for learners, and it has brought joy and interest into peoples lives. Unfortunately, some television programs have been extremely harmful to the young. Violent movies are shown on TV programs. Children regard the murders as heroes or models, so they imitate. Therefore there happened many murders or shooting cases in American campuses. What a big harm. So young people should learn to get ride of the bad influences of TV and learn to make use of the advantages that TV brings us. 选择一个你想旅游的地点，并安排旅行计划。你应包括下列内容： 1.说明你想旅游的地点； 2.说明你为什么选择这个地点； 3.描述你的旅行计划。 Dear Amy,I plan to make a journey to Jiuzhaigou in Si Chuan province. Its a beautiful place with fresh air, beautiful natural scenery like waterfall, lake and high mountains. Because many films and TV series have been made here, it is very famous. Whats more, I am very busy and exhausted this year, so I want to go for a relaxation. I plan to stay there for a week and travel with a tour group. I believe I will enjoy myself there. Regards Yours ever Tim 你应邀到一位好友家吃晚饭。事后给朋友写信表示谢意。你的信应包括下列内容： 1.表达谢意； 2.表达想回请的意愿； 3.期待朋友的光临。 Dear Amy: Thanks for your invitation to your home last night. I enjoy the food very much. I will hold a small party to celebrate my birthday on November 12th, and I will invite a lot of friends to have dinner at my home, would you like to join us? Oh, there will also be a band to perform live music. I think it will be exciting to dance with the live music. Please be sure to come. I am looking forward to your coming. Yours Cynthia试题第五部分为翻译题，要求考生把英语译为汉语，共有3个小题，每小题5分共15分。第五部分：英译汉（共3小题，每小题5分，共15分）(1).Wang Lis father has taught English here since he has graduated from Peking University. (2). There is something urgent for you to do right now.(3). Students can study by themselves through school network.做好翻译题的三要素：语法、词汇、常识语法、词汇、常识语法：要掌握基本的语法，时态、语态、语气；词汇：翻译过程中要注意英语中的固定搭配，难词要提前准备；常识：遇到生活中存在的常识性问题，即使在不认识词汇、不知道语法的前提下，也可根据常识判断，翻译成功。There is a large amount of energy wasted due to friction.由于摩擦，大量的能量被浪费了。 In Foreign Languages Department，a checking machine is used to correct the students test papers. 外语教研部用阅卷机给学生阅卷。We must take some measures to control the pollution.我们必须采取一些措施控制污染。The school management must be improved.必须要改进学校管理。被动语态A friend of mine from high school is working in England now.我高中的一个朋友现在在英格兰工作。People all over the world are trying to help the people in Sichuan.全世界人民都在尽力帮助四川人民。现在进行时It is not necessary to do this work.没有必要做这项工作。Do you think students should do a part-time job?你认为学生应该做兼职工作吗？They are ordinary people, but did a great job.他们是普通人，但是却做了一件大事。Many schools will not open until the beginning of September.很多学校到九月初才开学。I wan to get back home by five oclock if it is possible.如果可能的话，我想5点到家。I saved a baby and became a hero.我因为救了一个婴儿而成了英雄。He is growing more like his father now.他长的越来越像他爸爸了。