看图作文讲评1江苏省石庄高级中学 秦建华某对外发行的英文报纸对中国群众体育现状进行了调查，请根据下列图表和所给提示，用英语写一篇报道，向该报投稿。 参加体育活动的人口比例： （a）不懂锻炼方法者 （b）场地远、不方便 （c）缺少场地设施 （d）缺少时间 针对以上状况作出说明： 缺乏体育锻炼会使人们的体质下降； 应充分认识体育锻炼的重要性； 应采取措施，提供人们锻炼的场地和器材(facilities); 词数：120以上. 图表作文表达的一般步骤:第一步：开门见山点明图表所反映的主题。常用的词汇有：able,chart,figure,graph,describe,tell,show等等。第二步：分析数据间的主要差距及趋势，然后描写。在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式对比以表明主题，并阐述必要的理由，要注意表述层次的清楚。第三步：归纳总结或谈谈自己的看法。有时这一步也可以不要，看具体情况而定。 常用的词汇有：in a word,in short,generally speaking,Its claear from the chart that,We can draw the conclusion that,We can learn,We can know一、找出要点1、（被调查的人中）参加过体育活动者为35%，未参加过体育活动者为65%2、影响人们参加体育活动的原因（是多方面的）3、现状10%多一点的人不懂得锻炼的方法10%多一点的人（认为）场地远、不方便30%多一点的人（认为）缺少场地和设施一半以上的人（认为）缺少时间4、说明：缺乏体育锻炼会使人们体质下降应充分认识体育锻炼的重要性应采取措施，提供人们锻炼的场地和器材二、翻译要点1.Only 35 percent of the surveyed people have had sports.65% of them have never had sports.2.There are several reasons for this.3.More than 10% of them dont know how to train.More than 10% of them think the places where they can do exercise are so far away from their houses that it is not convenient for them to do so. Over 30% of them complain that there is not enough space or facilities.More than 10% of them say that they havent got enough time.4.Lack of physical training will not keep people healthy. It is necessary for people to realize the importance of physical training. Some measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities and places.三、修饰成文 Recently we made a survey of the people on physical training.Only 35 percent of the surveyed people have had sports but the rest have never. Do you know why ? There are several reasons for this. More than 10% of them dont know how to train.More than 10% of them think the places where they can do exercise are so far away from their houses that it is not convenient for them to do exercise.Over 30% of them complain that there is not enough space or facilities.Even more than 10% of them say that they havent got enough time. Lack of physical training will not keep people healthy. It is necessary for people to realize the importance of physical training.Some measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities and places. In a word everyone should take part in physical training in order to keep himself healthy.See you later!Post card:226531E-mail:rgjhq126.com rg001163.com