高一写作专题一：高一写作专题一：建议信建议信l一、文体概述一、文体概述l建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。l建议信的写作步骤写作步骤： l首段首段：表明写信意图表明写信意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 l主体段落主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。 l结尾段结尾段：表达希望采纳建议并期盼回希望采纳建议并期盼回复复。l二、写作结构二、写作结构l【篇首句篇首句】说明写信目的。说明写信目的。l1. Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.l很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是一些建议。l2. Im very glad to have received your e-mail. Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.l很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你建议。l3. I have received your letter saying Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.l我已经收到了你的来信，信上说。这里是一些建议，希望会对你有帮助。/ 可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。l4. You have asked me for my advice about how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.l你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。l5. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.l很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。l【篇中句篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。介绍详情、提出具体建议。l（可参考课本（可参考课本P7, part 2写作指导）写作指导）l1. Id like to suggest that 我想要建议l2. It would be a good idea to do sth. / Doing sth. will also help to. 做某事是不错的主意。/ 做某事也有帮助于l3. The best way to. is to. 最好的办法就是去做 l4. Youd better do./not do. 你最好/最好不l5. Its necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. ; more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.l在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这璧地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。l6. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.l首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。l7. As is known to all, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.l众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。l8. Whats more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly.l试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你才能很快的提高英语听力和口语。l9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learntl最后但也是很重要的一点是，你应养成记日记的习惯，这会帮助你提高英语写作，也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。l【篇尾句篇尾句】提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。l1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).l我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。l2. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.l无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。l3. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work !l我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，柷你学习/工作好运。l4. I sincerely hope that my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.l我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。l三、牛刀小试：根据提示完成下列作文。三、牛刀小试：根据提示完成下列作文。l假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信：l1. 参加中文学习班;l2. 看中文书刊、电视；l3. 学唱中文歌曲；l4. 交中国朋友。l注意：l1. 词数100左右；l2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；l3. 开头语已为你写好。 lDear Peter,l（第一段：说明写信目的）l1. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. l2. Im very glad to have received your e-mail. Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.l3. I have received your letter saying that you hope to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.l4. In your letter you have asked me for my advice about how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.参考写作结构中的篇首句句型参考写作结构中的篇首句句型l（第二段：提出具体建议（第二段：提出具体建议）lFirst, (参加中文学习班很有必要) _as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. lThen, （看中文书刊、电视也很有帮助） _.lBesides, （学习唱中文歌是一个很好的办法） _because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. It is important to take a Chinese course. It also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. It should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs参考参考【篇中句篇中句】表示建议的句型或课表示建议的句型或课本本P7, part 2写作指导写作指导 It is necessary for you to take a Chinese course. You can watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible, which will help you a lot.l（最后，你也可以交中国朋友） Finally, you can also make more Chinese friends They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Last but not least, you can also make some Chinese friends.l（第三段：希望采纳建议，并祝福）（第三段：希望采纳建议，并祝福）l1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a wayl2. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see your improvement.l3. I sincerely hope that my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.l Best wishes,l Li Hua参考写作结构中的篇尾句句型参考写作结构中的篇尾句句型l四、巩固操练（自选练习）四、巩固操练（自选练习）l假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，l不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。 l提示：1. 与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。 l2. 关心同学、乐于助人。 l3. 学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。 l4. 积极参加班级活动。 l词汇： 才能talent l范文（一） lDear Lin Hao, l Im glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions. l First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. Then, You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Besides, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent. l I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school. l Yours, l Li Hual范文（二）lDear Lin Hao, l In your letter, you said you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so long as you can follow the advice below. l First, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Second, youd better take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. Then you can make friends with more people. Besides, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary. With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above. l I hope you will find these ideas useful.l Yours, l Li hua