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二、超级仿写二、超级仿写2021江门二模江门二模他的英国朋友向他了解广州他的英国朋友向他了解广州, 请请用英语写一篇短文引见广州。包括上表中一切内用英语写一篇短文引见广州。包括上表中一切内容。容。概况概况 中国第三大城市中国第三大城市; 别称别称: 五羊城、花城等五羊城、花城等; 广东省省会广东省省会; 全市面积全市面积7,434平方公里平方公里; 人口人口1,000多万。多万。历史历史 2,200多年历史的文化名城多年历史的文化名城, 历史上丝绸历史上丝绸之路(海路)的始发港。之路(海路)的始发港。地理地理 珠江从市中心穿过珠江从市中心穿过, 温暖湿润。温暖湿润。旅游旅游 风光旖旎风光旖旎, 旅游资源丰富。旅游资源丰富。 Let me tell you something about Guangzhou. Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong Province and the third largest city in China, is also known as Five-lamb City, Flower City and so on. This city / It covers a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers with a population of more than ten million. Guangzhou, a famous city with a history of more than 2, 200 years, is a starting port of the Silk Road on the sea in history. With the Pearl River winding its way / running through the city, Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. The beautiful city, which is well-known for its beautiful scenery, is also rich in traveling resources. I hope you will have a good time in Guangzhou. Covering an area of 485,000 square kilometers, Sichuan Province, is located in the south-west of China, whose capital is Chengdu.定语应尽量接近所修饰的词定语应尽量接近所修饰的词定语从句尽量接近先行词定语从句尽量接近先行词Covering an area of 485,000 square kilometers, Sichuan Province, whose capital is Chengdu, is located in the south-west of China.Sichuan Province, located in the south-west of China, covers an area of about 485,000 square kilometers, ,whose capital is Chengdu.定语应尽量接近所修饰的词定语应尽量接近所修饰的词定语从句尽量接近先行词定语从句尽量接近先行词Located in the south-west of China, Sichun Province, whose capital is chengdu, covers an area of Jiuzaigou which is famous for its lakes is located in the north-west of Sichun, with beautiful rivers.专有名词独一无二的如人名、专有名词独一无二的如人名、地名后应该运用非限制性定语从句地名后应该运用非限制性定语从句Jiuzaigou,which is famous for its lakes with beautiful rivers,is locatedJiuzaigou,which is located, is famous for its lakes with beautiful rivers.The Dujiangyan Irrigation Project has played a important role now, with a long history of more than 2,000 years.The Dujiangyan Irrigation Project, with a long history of more than 2,000 years, is still playing an important role now. Sichun is neither too cold nor too hot.逻辑关系逻辑关系The weather in Sichun is neither too cold nor too hot. Sichuan Province, whose capital city is Chengdu, lies in the south-west of China and covers an area of about 485,000 km2 with a population of more than one hundred million. It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, whose water is so clear that you can see the bottom of them. Another attraction is the Jujiangyan Irrigation Project, which was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part (in irrigation) today. Whats more, the nice / comfortable weather, convenient transportation and the variety of famous hot food can also make your trip even more enjoyable.1.李明不断很想实现本人的理想李明不断很想实现本人的理想, 成为一名成为一名探险家。探险家。2.2. 他的父母不断试图压服他放弃这个想他的父母不断试图压服他放弃这个想法。法。3.3. 一天,李明离家出走一天,李明离家出走, 并留下一封信并留下一封信, 为本人的不辞而别向父母负疚。为本人的不辞而别向父母负疚。4.4. 李明决议启航去无名的岛屿李明决议启航去无名的岛屿, 寻觅刺激寻觅刺激感。感。5.5. 在海上遇上了龙卷风在海上遇上了龙卷风(tornado), 李明李明认识到本人堕入了姿态。认识到本人堕入了姿态。6. 这是李明第一次单独出行这是李明第一次单独出行, 他差点他差点被吓死了。被吓死了。7. 在好心人的协助下在好心人的协助下, 他幸免于难。他幸免于难。8. 住院两个星期后住院两个星期后, 李明康复了。李明康复了。9. 他设法联络到父母他设法联络到父母, 让他们到医院让他们到医院去接他。去接他。1.Liming wanted to achieve his ambition of being an explorer.2.But his parents tried to persuade him to give up the idea all the time.3.One day, Li Ming left home and left a letter, in order to make an apology to his parents for leaving without saying goodbye.4.Li Ming decided to set sail to the unknown island, in search of excitement. 5. On the way to the island, Li Ming met the tornado, which made Li Ming be aware of getting into trouble.6. It was the first time that Li Ming had gone out alone and he seemed to scared to death.7. With the help of the kind people, he survived.be aware of + n be aware / realize that + 句子句子8. After living in the hospital for two weeks, he recovered.9. He managed to get in touch with parents, made them pick him up from the hospital.stayingasking them to pick优秀句子优秀句子But unluckily, he met a tornado on the sea and he realised that he was stuck in trouble, which sacred him to death. ( 9班,刘佩雄班,刘佩雄) One day, he set sail in search of an island without name to experience excitement after leaving a letter to apologise for leaving without saying good-bye. (9班,石玉良班,石玉良)没有语法错误但不建议运用的句子没有语法错误但不建议运用的句子1. Li Ming went away from home with a letter left for the purpose of apologysing without saying good-bye to his parents.1. 从简原那从简原那么么leaving a letter2. 目的目的 for the purpose of + n(名词名词) to + do(动词动词)to apologise没有语法错误但不建议运用的句子没有语法错误但不建议运用的句子2. Li Ming decided to set sail to the unknown island, just for finding the felling of excitement.1) 表目的表目的 for + n(名词名词) to + do(动词动词)2) find 找到找到 look for / search for 寻觅寻觅 / 寻求寻求to look for没有语法错误但不建议运用的句子没有语法错误但不建议运用的句子3. One day, Li Ming left home and left a letter with the purpose of making an apology to his parents for leaving without saying good-bye. 目的目的 for the purpose of + n(名词名词) to + do(动词动词)to make没有思索逻辑关系进展的错误合并没有思索逻辑关系进展的错误合并1. It was the first time that he had got out alone, so he realized that he got into trouble and was scared to death while meeting a tornado in the sea.由于他是第一次单独出门,所以他认识到由于他是第一次单独出门,所以他认识到While meeting a tornado , he realized that he got into trouble. And since it was the ., he was scared to death.没有思索逻辑关系进展的错误合并没有思索逻辑关系进展的错误合并2. Li Ming wanted to realize his dream that he would become an explorer so that his parents always tried to persuade him into giving up this thought.李明想实现当探险家的梦想,以致于他李明想实现当探险家的梦想,以致于他的父母总是想劝他放弃。的父母总是想劝他放弃。but为了减少句子数量而拼命堆砌信息的错误合并为了减少句子数量而拼命堆砌信息的错误合并3. When the first time for him to travel on his own, he was scared to death as he was facing the tornado in the sea, which help him come to realize that he was stuck in trouble. Since / Because it was the first time that he had traveled on , he was scared to death. When he was faced with, he realized that he was1. 李明不断很想实现本人的理想李明不断很想实现本人的理想, 成成为一名探险家。为一名探险家。Li Ming always wanted to achieve his ambition to be an explorer.2. 他的父母不断试图压服他放弃这他的父母不断试图压服他放弃这个想法。个想法。His parents have been always trying to persuade him to give up this idea.3. 一天,李明离家出走一天,李明离家出走, 并留下一并留下一封信封信, 为本人的不辞而别向父母负为本人的不辞而别向父母负疚。疚。One day, Li Ming ran away from home and left his parents a letter to apologize for leaving without saying goodbye.4. 李明决议启航去无名的岛屿李明决议启航去无名的岛屿, 寻觅寻觅刺激感。刺激感。Li Ming decided to set sail for unknown islands, in search of excitement.5. 在海上遇上了龙卷风在海上遇上了龙卷风(tornado), 李李明认识到本人堕入了姿态。明认识到本人堕入了姿态。Li Ming ran into a tornado on the sea, and realized he got into trouble.6. 这是李明第一次单独出行这是李明第一次单独出行, 他差他差点被吓死了。点被吓死了。This was Li Mings first time that he had traveled on his own, and he was scared to death.7. 在好心人的协助下在好心人的协助下, 他幸免于难。他幸免于难。With the help of kind-hearted people, he survived the accident.8. 住院两个星期后住院两个星期后, 李明康复了。李明康复了。8. After staying in hospital for two weeks, Li Ming recovered.9. 他设法联络到父母他设法联络到父母, 让他们到医让他们到医院去接他。院去接他。 9. He managed to get in touch with his parents and asked them to pick him up at the hospital. Li Ming always wanted to achieve his ambition to be an explorer, though his parents have been always trying to persuade him to give up this idea. One day, he ran away from home, leaving his parents a letter to apologize for leaving without saying goodbye, and decided to set sail for unknown islands, in search of excitement. 合并:合并:Running into a tornado on the sea, Li Ming realized he got into trouble, and since this is Li Mings first time that he has traveled on his own, hes scared to death. Luckily, with the help of kind-hearted people, he survived the accident and recovered after staying in hospital for two weeks. Eventually, he managed to get in touch with his parents, asking them to pick him up at the hospital.
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