Writing in CET-4Writing in CET-4Whats a good essay in CET-4?Whats a good essay in CET-4?How to generate ideas?How to generate ideas?How to write a logical essay?How to write a logical essay?How to write correctly?How to write correctly?四四级级作文作文评评分分标标准准2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。 Can you grade these essays?Can you grade these essays?Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Limiting the Use of Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given belowl一次性塑料袋曾广为使用l由此带来的问题l限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义1-21-2分分2-142-14分分3-83-8分分4-114-11分分5-55-5分分Here is how they are graded in CET-4. Is your assessment correct?主主语语缺失缺失1)In our country feels very free.2)In my hometown arent very busy.词词性混淆性混淆( (非名非名词词主主语语) )1)Rich doesnt ensure a happy life.2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.多重多重谓语谓语1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.2)Poverty makes many people cant study abroad.非非动词谓语动词谓语1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it2)It is said that the place worths touring.时态时态 性数不配合性数不配合1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.代代词偷词偷梁梁换换柱柱1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.形容形容词词 副副词词混淆混淆1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.搭配不当搭配不当1). In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.8 pointsWe all have such experience: after we went to the super market, we always get some plastic bags. Even the disposable plastic bags pollute our environment, few of us can refuse to get plastic bags, because we are used use it.With the flying developing of economic, the disposable plastic bags are more wide used. But our environment cant stand by the heavy pollution. The disposable plastic bags will exist many years, maybe the plastic bags which you ever used would still be there when you have a grandson. So it not only effect our life but also hurt our afterspring. So the government started to limit the use of plastic bags. This action is effective that many people use paper or clothing bags instead of plastic bags. Although there are many plastic bags are used, I think after some years, we will feel the advantage that limiting the use of plastic bags bring to us.历历年四年四级级作文作文题题作文题目作文题目2011.12Nothing succeeds without a Strong Will2011.6Online Shopping2010.12How should parents help children to be independent2010.6Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling2009.12Creating a Green Campus2009.6Free Admissions to Museums2008.12Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags作文常作文常见见提提纲纲要求要求2011.12 Nothing succeeds without a strong will1. 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。2. 意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命，3. 学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才2011.6 online shopping1现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3我的建议2010.12 How should parents help children to be independent？1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该 2010.6 Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling1 . 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2. 出现这种情况的原因3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为作文常作文常见见提提纲纲要求要求问题/现象原因解决办法问题/现象好处/坏处我的观点观点举例对自身的借鉴意义第一第一类类l问题/现象象l原因原因l解决解决办法法2010.6 Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling1 . 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2. 出现这种情况的原因3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为问题问题/ /现现象象lIn recent years, XX has caused a heated debate.lNowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.lXX has become a increasing concern of the public.注意事注意事项项1.万能公式的使用2.简洁明了3.适当拓展，如举例原因原因lThere are a couple of reasons accounting for this problem/phenomenon.lFirst/FirstlylSecond/SecondlylThird/ThirdlylLast but not least解决解决办办法法To solve this problem, we need to Besides, Moreover例文writing四级作文样卷2010-06四级作文2010-06四级作文14.JPG第二第二类类l问题/现象象l好好处/坏坏处l我的我的观点点2011.6 online shopping1现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3我的建议问题问题/ /现现象象lIn recent years, XX has caused a heated debate.lNowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.lXX has become a increasing concern of the public.好好处处/ /坏坏处处Somepeopleareinfavorof.TheypointoutthefactthatHowever,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.exampleexampleOnline shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumers, it can save time. Just with a click of the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut down on the costs of renting a house or paying the staff However, there are still some defects about online shopping. First, compared with face-to-face transaction, online shopping is less reliable-consumers may find the products not as desirable as they had expected. Second, some people may lose the fun of bargain.我的我的观观点点InmyopinionFrommyperspectiveAsfarasIamconcernedIagreethefirstopinion/secondopinion第三第三类类l观点点l举例例l对自自 身的借身的借鉴意意义2011.12 Nothing succeeds without a strong will1. 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。2. 意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命，3. 学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才ExampleExampleNothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well. Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up.Infact,strongwillisakindofgoodqualitywhichsuccessfulpeopleshouldown.Onewillneversucceedwithoutafirmwilltogetthefinalvictory.Asarule,greattasksareaccomplishedbymenofstrongwill.Forexample,Dr.SunYatsen,thefounderoftheRepublicofChina,settheChinesepeoplefreefromtheManchurianrulethroughalongperiodofhardstruggle.Manyofhisattemptsfailedandmanyofhisfollowerswerekilled,buthehadaninflexiblespiritandstucktohiscause.Finally,hemadetherevolutionof1911asuccess.Thesameistrueofmeninallwalksoflife.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecanseethattoughdeterminationisofgreatimportancetoeveryone.Asastudent,withastrongwill,wewillbeabletoconqueranydifficultyinourstudyandbravelyfaceuptoallfailuresinthecourseofouracademicpursuit.Aslongaswesticktoourdreamanddonotgiveupeasily,wewillrealizethegoalatlast.