专题二十四短文写作专题二十四短文写作 第五模块短文写作第五模块短文写作目录目录第五模块短文写作第五模块短文写作第五模块第五模块 考情分析考情分析 【考纲解读考纲解读】短文写作是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语短文写作是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进表达能力，看其是否能够运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。该题要求考生根据提示语要求，应用所学知识将行思想交流。该题要求考生根据提示语要求，应用所学知识将所提示的信息组成行文连贯、文理畅通、语言得体的文章。它所提示的信息组成行文连贯、文理畅通、语言得体的文章。它不但要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且要有较强的语言表不但要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且要有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，是一种复合型的题型达能力和逻辑思维能力，是一种复合型的题型。 考情分析考情分析【命题透视】分析湖北高考短文写作，不难发现如下特点：湖北卷“短文写作”一改以往命题给出具体内容要点的做法，要求考生根据英文提示，结合生活中的一个事例，根据所给的英语提示，写一篇话题作文。这种“开放式”的论述文的命题形式给考生很大的自由发挥空间，对写作的布局谋篇提出了较高要求，要求考生既要会发表观点认识，又要会进行描写叙述。这种写作命题有利于立体考查学生的语言知识、创新思维能力和价值观，具有较强的选拔功能；同时，也有助于引领高中教师在新课改的教学中认真落实“知识与能力、过程与方法、情感态度与价值观”的三维目标。 第五模块第五模块 考情分析考情分析第五模块第五模块 应试点睛应试点睛针对湖北短文写作的命题特点，在具体写作时要注意以下针对湖北短文写作的命题特点，在具体写作时要注意以下几点：几点：一、一、 读读“提示语提示语”，锁定写作，锁定写作“话题话题” 湖北高考的英文提示语其实是让学生在英文语境中选择一湖北高考的英文提示语其实是让学生在英文语境中选择一个恰如其分的话题，所以读懂提示语，选择合适的话题是写作个恰如其分的话题，所以读懂提示语，选择合适的话题是写作的关键。近年来，话题的写作始终围绕中学生的健康成长、社的关键。近年来，话题的写作始终围绕中学生的健康成长、社会人生观、价值观等方面进行，写作时要做到会人生观、价值观等方面进行，写作时要做到“观点观点”和和“事事例例”的统一性、互衬性。的统一性、互衬性。 应试点睛应试点睛二、 拟定提纲，按照规律行文写作湖北高考英语短文写作多采用三段式结构，即引言(introduction)主体(body)结尾(conclusion)。引言部分通常给出，让学生在限定的范围内组织要点，完成主体部分和结尾部分。写作时要遵循以下规律：1开头部分开头部分必须点题，用 23个句子完成，其中要有一个漂亮的过渡句。第五模块第五模块 应试点睛应试点睛2主体部分主体部分其实是让学生用言简意赅的语言叙述一个结构完整、思想意义饱满的事例。注意所讲的事例一定要能突出话题的中心，可用810个句子完成。3结尾部分结尾部分要用概括性的语言来总结全文主题，得出结论，回归话题。其实，该部分就是在叙事的基础上加以评论，是记叙文写作中的“小抒情”。 第五模块第五模块 应试点睛应试点睛专题二十四短文写作专题二十四短文写作专题二十四专题二十四短文写作短文写作(一一)2012湖北卷湖北卷 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈昨天，今天及明天。昨天，今天及明天。You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.注意：注意： 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌除诗歌外，文体不限；外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词词数为数为120左右。左右。专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例真题典例真题典例【思路点拨思路点拨】本篇作文属于夹叙夹议的半开放式作文，要本篇作文属于夹叙夹议的半开放式作文，要求考生结合生活中的事例来诠释求考生结合生活中的事例来诠释“我们不能选择我们被给予的我们不能选择我们被给予的东西，但我们能选择如何利用好给予我们的东西东西，但我们能选择如何利用好给予我们的东西”。考生在写。考生在写作过程中一定要结合生活中的事例作过程中一定要结合生活中的事例(事例的篇幅应该占大部分事例的篇幅应该占大部分)进进行总结和提炼，起到点睛作用。注意生活事例列举部分应该用行总结和提炼，起到点睛作用。注意生活事例列举部分应该用一般过去时，而最后的总结部分应该用一般现在时。以一般过去时，而最后的总结部分应该用一般现在时。以23段段为宜。写作过程中应适当注意素材及词语的选择，注意对生活为宜。写作过程中应适当注意素材及词语的选择，注意对生活感知能力的挖掘。感知能力的挖掘。专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例One possible version：Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. 专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. 专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例(二二)2011湖北卷湖北卷 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，除诗歌外，文体不限；文体不限；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；得透露个人姓名和学校名称；专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例(二二)2011湖北卷湖北卷 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，除诗歌外，文体不限；文体不限；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为词数为100100左右。左右。 专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例One possible version：Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didnt realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students care little about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class. 专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficiently. 专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例(三三)2010湖北卷湖北卷 请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls. 注意：注意：无须写标题；无须写标题； 内容只需涉及一个方面；内容只需涉及一个方面； 词数为词数为100左右。左右。专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例One possible version：No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted. Sometimes a smile is so powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage. 专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan. Right after he was rescued by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in sadness. It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult. It is suggested that we smile as much as possible. 专题二十四专题二十四 真题典例真题典例专题二十四专题二十四 新题预测新题预测请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈昨天、今天及请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈昨天、今天及明天。明天。Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift.That is why it is called the present.注意：注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为词数为120左右。左右。新题预测新题预测One possible version：All the past things become history, which cannot be changed. However, in daily life, people always say that if they did this or that, they would be better off now. Does this make any sense? No. Its widely acknowledged that you cannot change the past whatever you do. Then why should we have regrets for what happened in the past? Similarly, we should not attach too much importance to the future, for it is really something uncertain unless you make it come true. 专题二十四专题二十四 新题预测新题预测 Therefore, the present, which is what we are sure about, is very important, because by making full use of it we can find a way to success. Please seize the hour, seize the day and treasure every moment that you have！专题二十四专题二十四 新题预测新题预测专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题(一一)请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例用英语写一篇请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例用英语写一篇短文。短文。Many students may have had the experience of cheating in exams, which not only results in an unfair competition but also has a bad effect on the habit of study, ruining the creativity and selfconfidence of those students.注意：注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；除诗歌外，文体不限；备用习题备用习题内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称；词数为120左右。One possible version：Cheating in exams seems to be inevitable even though we all know it is dishonest. When having difficulty passing exams, those who dont study hard or grasp what they have learnt tend to cheat in order to get high grades.专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题One of my classmates is just such a guy. When faced with exams, he tried to use different ways to cheat like passing small pieces of paper with answers, referring to his books or copying others answers. As a result, he did get a better grade which was beyond his own ability. Gradually, he became increasingly dependent on others answers rather than think for himself. Whats more, he became less and less confident of dealing with difficult problems.Its obvious that cheating does harm to us. We should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard.专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题(二)请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。A man is not old as long as he is seeking something. A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams. (by J. Barrymore)注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌之外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题One possible version：Hopes and dreams are important in daily life. HOPE means “Hold On, Pain Ends”. I think young people should have dreams and hopes, but they should never have regrets.I had a dream when I was a little girl. I wanted to learn the piano, because I thought girls who could play the piano were elegant and beautiful. However, my mother told me that my fingers were too short to play the piano. So my dream could only be a dream in my head. 专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题Years later, I walked past a piano shop that offered piano lessons. Suddenly I realized I still wanted to learn the piano. I told myself I shouldnt have any regrets. Then I made my dream come true.My experience tells me that hopes and dreams are the inspiration that makes me move forward all the time.专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题(三)一个好的学生应该具有许多优秀品质(如下图所示)，你认为哪个或哪两个是最重要的呢？为什么？请分析原因，并结合自己的生活实际，写下你的感悟。要求：词数：120左右；文中不得出现真实的学生姓名。注意：文章连贯，条理清楚，详略得当；结合实际，写出真情实感。专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题One possible version：Being passionate, honest and hardworking, a good student is always listening and learning. Personally speaking, I strongly believe that honesty is the most important among dozens of good qualities.There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”， and it seems as true as it was when first coined. The most important element in human relationships, whether business or personal, is trust.专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题Here is one of my secrets. I once lied to my parents because of my poor scores. Although having known the real fact from teachers, they praised and encouraged me, showing their deep love. Later days, my conscience swallowed me, growing as I told lie after lie in an effort to conceal my original deceit. I gave it up, and chose to be frank. Wow! It is better to stick to the truth!From then on, I have kept the following in my minds: If it is not true, dont say it. If it is not right, dont do it. Honesty is not only the best policy, but also a principle, which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life.专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题(四)众所周知，一个人的成长过程是较为复杂的，其个性的形成和发展受诸多因素的影响，比如： 家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、名人等。假如二十一世纪英文报向你约稿，了解至今哪些因素对你的成长影响最大。请你以Tracking My Growth为题，按以下要求写篇英语短文：1. 选择并陈述对你的成长起着很大影响的家庭、学校、社会、朋友、书籍、名人等诸多因素中的两个或三个；2. 谈谈你的看法和理由。注意：词数120左右，文章的标题已给出(不计入总词数)。专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题One possible version：Tracking My GrowthAs is known to all, ones character is shaped by many factors. As for me, what has influenced me most in my growth are my family and friends.I used to be a selfish boy who wasnt willing to share my toys with others. My parents told me I would have no friends if I didnt learn to share. Every time they brought home a toy, they wouldnt give it to me unless I promised to share it with my friends. 专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题 When the terrible earthquake struck Wenchuan, my parents donated a large sum of money and some clothes to the people there. Influenced by them, I became a caring boy, too. I was weak in math in the past. Fortunately my friend Xiao Jun came to my aid. Every weekend, he would come to my house and help me with my math. Thanks to his help, I finally caught up with other students. Now I also do whatever I can to help others just like Xiao Jun.专题二十四专题二十四 备用习题备用习题