2018写作指导写作指导-建议信建议信平遥第三中学校平遥第三中学校 李建红李建红To better your writing 让你的作文让你的作文 起来起来2024/9/221.students work(学生作品）学生作品）自我介绍自我介绍写信目的写信目的列举原因列举原因期待结果期待结果2.students work(学生作品）学生作品）写信目的写信目的期待结果期待结果对活动的理解对活动的理解【教师点评教师点评】 书写整洁，过了卷面关书写整洁，过了卷面关 措辞准确，过了语言关措辞准确，过了语言关 文脉清晰，过了内容关文脉清晰，过了内容关 过渡流畅，过了结构关过渡流畅，过了结构关 总评：总评： 这两篇文章写得很棒！这两篇文章写得很棒！列举原因列举原因3.What makes a good piece of writing?1.neat writing书写书写2. content内容内容3. structure结构结构4. language语言语言Good first impressionWell organized and smoothly developedEverything required includedNo ChinglishNo Grammatical mistakes exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns4.How to better your writing5.英语写作英语写作五部曲五部曲step1 topic exploring 审题审题step2 wording 构词构词step3 sentence making 成句成句step4 essay writing 成篇成篇step5 improving 修订修订6.Step1 审题审题1 审体裁审体裁 2 审人称审人称3 审时态审时态4 审要点审要点定文章结构定文章结构7.练练国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 自我介绍自我介绍 写信目的写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由推荐理由 预祝活动成功预祝活动成功注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出；邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。在答题卡上作答。8. 审审 题题 n文文 体：体：n时时 态：态：n人人 称称:n内容要点：内容要点： 推荐信推荐信 一般现在时为主一般现在时为主1.向全球中学生征集话题向全球中学生征集话题2.新华中学的学生新华中学的学生3.访问你们的网站访问你们的网站4.推荐一个话题推荐一个话题5.我们应该感恩我们应该感恩6.推荐理由推荐理由7.预祝活动成功预祝活动成功 第一人称为主第一人称为主9.三段式三段式总总分分总总自我介绍自我介绍写信目的写信目的话题（我们应该感恩）话题（我们应该感恩）列举理由列举理由预祝活动成功预祝活动成功in briefin detailin brief文章结构文章结构10.Step2 wording 拼写拼写 词性词性近义词近义词 同音词同音词单复数单复数 冠词冠词大小写大小写 Simple mistakesleave a bad impression!11.Wording 构词 Find the key words 找关键词找关键词2.新华中学的学生新华中学的学生3.访问你们的网站访问你们的网站4.推荐一个话题推荐一个话题5.我们应该感恩我们应该感恩6.推荐理由推荐理由 7.预祝活动成功预祝活动成功Translate the key words 翻译关键词（除去翻译第翻译关键词（除去翻译第6个要个要点）点）1.向全球中学生征集话题向全球中学生征集话题12.2.新华中学的学生新华中学的学生a student from Xin Hua Middle School3.访问你们的网站访问你们的网站visit your website4.推荐一个话题推荐一个话题recommend one5.我们应该感恩我们应该感恩We should be thankful.6.推荐理由推荐理由7.预祝活动成功预祝活动成功Wish the activity a great success.looking for topics from students all over the world1.向全球中学生向全球中学生征集话题征集话题构词构词13.step3 sentencing 成句成句1 简单句简单句2 并列句并列句3 复合句复合句4 非谓语形式非谓语形式5 特殊结构特殊结构时态，语时态，语态态别忘了并列连词别忘了并列连词No Chinglish!连词的选择连词的选择主语一致主语一致避生就熟！避生就熟！强调句型；倒装；强调句型；倒装；独立主格结构独立主格结构成句成句14.Step4 成篇成篇 That we should be thankful is a good idea. It is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank them. We owe our teachers thanks, for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work. Thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue. Where there is thankfulness, there are hopes to make the world better. Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize how beautiful life is. In my opinionfirstlybesidesWhatsmoreNecessary conjunctions make a pieces a writing more smoothly developed.成篇成篇15.建议性书信文体模板：Dear. （So glad to have received your last letter), Im(简单自我介绍），简单自我介绍），Im writing to(表明写信目的）表明写信目的） I think.is a good idea/I suggest / recommend / adviseI have my reasons, firstly.,then.,finally. Best regards and wish you(简单祝福简单祝福) Yours 修订修订16.Now, Lets check whether our writing has been improved in content, structure and language ?我们的文章我们的文章亮亮起来了么起来了么？17. Im Lihua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School. I often visit your website, where I got the wonderful news that youre looking for topics from students all over the world. Here, Im writing to recommend one. In my opinion, that we should be thankful is a good idea. Firstly, it is our parents who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank them. Besides, we owe our teachers thanks, for we couldnt be who we are now without their hard work. Whats more, thankfulness is also our traditional Chinese virtue. Where there is thankfulness, there are hopes to make the world better. Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize how beautiful life is. Hopefully, my topic will be chosen. Wish the activity a great success.23分分18.19. 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：服力。通常包括：1. 说明写信目的。说明写信目的。2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。文体概述文体概述20.常用语块常用语块 1. 给某人提建议给某人提建议 _ 2. 如下如下 _ 3. 在做某事时遇到困难在做某事时遇到困难 _ 4. 利用利用 _ 5. 向某人征求意见向某人征求意见_ask sb. for advicegive sb. some advice (on)as followshave difficulty/trouble in doing sth.make use of21.6. 制订计划制订计划 _7. 认为认为有用有用 _8. 参加参加 _9. 听从某人的建议听从某人的建议 _10. 把把考虑在内考虑在内 _take sth. into account/considerationmake a planfindhelpful/useful/beneficialtake part in/participate infollow ones advice22.11. 得到改善得到改善 _12. 有所好转有所好转 _13. 依我看来依我看来 _14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你我已收到你的来信，得知你 _15. 我建议我建议 _ I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommendation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you, I would/May I suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion thatget improvedchange for the betterin my opinion/in my view/from my point of viewI have received your letter saying that you23.套用句式套用句式 1. 你就你就向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。设性的建议。 2. 我觉得如果能够我觉得如果能够将会很有帮助的。将会很有帮助的。1. You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.2. I feel that it would be beneficial if24.3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。我相信你会考虑我的建议的。5. 如能看到如能看到我会非常开心的。我会非常开心的。3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.5. I would be more than happy to see4. I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.25.课堂练习课堂练习假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给Lora写一封写一封回信。要点如下：回信。要点如下：1. Lora打算利用暑假打工。打算利用暑假打工。2. Lora父母不同意的理由。父母不同意的理由。3. 你给你给Lora的具体建议。的具体建议。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。26.Dear Lora, I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents dont allow you to do so. I understand your situation. I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps theyd like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are too young to work.27.I think you had better have a talk with your parents. If they agree, you should make a detailed plan for your study and work, ask your friends to work together with you, and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly. Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.Yours truly,Li Hua28.课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给泣。对此，请你给Jenny写一封建议信，要点如下：写一封建议信，要点如下：1. 鼓励鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念，志存高远，四海为家。坚定求学信念，志存高远，四海为家。2. 就就Jenny的目前状况，提两到三个建议。的目前状况，提两到三个建议。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。29.Dear Jenny, I am so glad to have a talk with you. I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.30.Try to make friends on your school campus, and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you take an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day.Yours faithfully,Li Hua31.