How to correct a composition 短文改错短文改错教学目的和要求教学目的和要求教学目的和要求教学目的和要求改错题有没有技巧和方法改错题有没有技巧和方法？改错题怎么做？改错题怎么做？教学目的和要求教学目的和要求高考常见错误高考常见错误八八 连词连词 一一 名词名词二二 冠词冠词 三三 动词动词四四 形容词和副词形容词和副词五五 代词代词 六六 介词介词七七 数词数词一、名词和冠词一、名词和冠词 NMET2001： so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. NMET2003: Their word were a great encouragement to me. _ subjects words1、Bill was standing at the side of the car, talking to two men who was helping him to repair it. werev2、Modernpeopleknowmoreaboutthehealth,havebetterfood,andliveinclearersurroundings.v3、Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.v4、Aseveryoneknows,itsfamousmountainwithallvkindsofplantsandanimals.v5、Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.vtheaa(6)Afterahourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightened.(7)Idecidedtoclimbthetreetoseewherewewere.ana查名词名词的易考点是名词的单复数和可数名词与不可名数名词的区别。二、二、动词动词 NMET2003：She liked it very much and reads it to the class. NMET2000： Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. readare 动词(1)ImgladtolearnthatyouvebeensettleddowninBostonandaregettingusedtothelocalwaysoflife.(2)Whenonestudentdoesso,muchlargervaluesaredestroying.(3)andletyouknowwhenthebookyouwanthasreturnedandisreadyforyoutopickup.(4)Whentheycamehere,Iwillshowthemaroundmyuniversityandthecityjustaswell.destroyedbeencome(5)Today,itismucheasiertobehealthythanitisinthepast.(6)Theyofferedmecoffeeandotherdrinks.Wehaveagoodtimetalkingandlaughingtogether.(7)Ihadalwayswantedtoreturntothevillageaftermovingaway.Anditisreallygreattoseemostofmyoldfriendsagain.hadwaswas查动词查动词 动词的易考点是时态不一致；动词的易考点是时态不一致；三人称单数形式误用；主被动语三人称单数形式误用；主被动语态乱用。态乱用。三、三、形容词和副词形容词和副词 NMET 2004 : I would describe myself as shy and quietly. _NMET 2005 : He asked angry if we had finished the work. _ quietangrily(1)Afteranhourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightening.(2)LastSunday,policecarshurriedtothetallerbuildinginNewYork.(3)Asaresult,peopleinthemodernworldgenerallylivemuchmorelongerthanpeopleinthepast.frightenedtallest 查形副查形副形容词和副词易考点一般包括以下形容词和副词易考点一般包括以下几个方面：几个方面：(1)形容词和副词的混形容词和副词的混用，是短文改错中常见的考点之用，是短文改错中常见的考点之一；一；(2)比较级和最高级的混用或比较级和最高级的混用或误用；误用；(3)比较级和最高级修饰语比较级和最高级修饰语的误用。的误用。四代词1)Ifhespendsmostofhistimeplayingaboutinthewaythatheusedtoasachild,theywillgohungry.(2)butIbelieveyoupersonalexperiencewillbealotbetter(3)Ireadyoure-mailtomyparentsandshowthemthephotoyousentittome.(4)Imsureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit.heyour(5)Whenwewalkedtothecar,Billsmiledandshookhead.(6)Wechosethecheapestbiscuitsandateitunderatree(7)Gettingoutoftheclassroomisindeednecessaryforweallhisthemus查代词代词易考点一般包括以下几个方面：(1)掌握各类代词的基本用法，包括人称代词、物主代词、反身代词、不定代词以及代词的各种格，如主格、宾格等以及几种形式的误用；(2）代词的性别误用；(3)记住一些特殊用法的代词，如it可作形式主语或形式宾语；one，that和those可以用来代替前面提到的名词等；（4）代词的单复数误用；（5）代词的漏用。五介词五介词(1)TherearesomanyplacesIwanttotakeyoutoafterIfinishmyworklikeavolunteer.(2)Ifthebookyouwantisout,youmayaskittobekeptforyou.(3)Herstrengthmademestrongerandgavetomecouragetotrythingsothersthoughtwereimpossible(4)andmydadexplainedfortherules.(5)ImgoingtostayinNottinghambymyauntandunclewhenmycousinjoinsintheNavy.(6)IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.asfor查介词介词在句中不能单独使用，而必须和另外的词放在一起才可以充当独立的句子成分。此类改错题主要考查介词的意义、用法及固定搭配。介词易考点一般包括以下几个方面:(1)介词错用；(2)介词多余，涉及动词时，如果动词是及物动词，其后直接接宾语，不需要介词，如果其后有介词，那这个介词就是多余的；(3)介词漏用，不及物动词不可以直接接宾语，如果接宾语需借助于恰当的介词，如果缺少了这个介词，就会出现错误。六数词六数词(1)Myfirstonejobwastocleanthetablesinasmallrestaurant.(2)Whenhewasinhisfifty,hemovedtoFrance.(3)Thisbigsteelplanthasathousandofworkers.(4)Aboutthree-fifthoftheworkersofthatsteelworksareyoungpeople.fiftiesthree-fifths查数词查数词 数词易考点一般包括数词易考点一般包括: 基数词、基数词、序数词、分数词的互改。序数词、分数词的互改。七非谓语七非谓语这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分现在分词、过去分词，动名词词、过去分词，动名词和和不定式不定式错误。例如：错误。例如：NMET2001： My parents love me and will do all they can make sure NMET 2002: We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. _NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. _ tovisitedtalking八连词八连词(1)Iwasonlyaboutsixthatheheldhishandouttome.(2)SoIdidntloseheartandkeptrunning.(3)WelikedthedishesyouhadcookedbutwewerehappytolearntheEnglishsongsyoutaughtus.(4)Therefore,myfatherlovesfootball.(5)Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.whenButandhoweverwhen查连词查连词 连词易考点一般包括以下几方面：错用and与but ；勿连so与because; Although不与but连；肯是and否是or。 Practice makes perfect. 谚谚 熟能生巧熟能生巧