Tasks:1.Analyze the problems of students compositions.2.Translate some important phrases. 3.Enjoy some beautiful sentences from students.4.Improve their writings.5.Appreciate a possible version.作文分析存在问题：1.书写问题：字迹不工整，涂改较多2.短语翻译不到位3.句子结构混乱要求：1.字迹工整，零涂改字迹工整，零涂改2.熟记常用句型，做到灵活运用熟记常用句型，做到灵活运用3.有运用高级句型的意识有运用高级句型的意识一。短语1.不同的文化different cultures2.产生误会cause misunderstandings3.人们第一次见面 people meet for the first time/when people first meet 4.直呼其名call ones name directly/ call each other by their given names5.和谐相处live in harmony withEnjoy some beautiful sentences from you:Para 1：There are many different customs in different places. (孙伟健)There are many countries in the world. Every country has its own custom. If we dont understand it, we may be misunderstood because of different customs.(黄凯杰)If we dont understand this, many people might have trouble communicating with others. Here are some examples.(赵鑫)There are many different customs in the world. If we dont understand this point, it may cause something embarrassing among people who have different customs.(翟慧琴)If we are not aware of this point, people who have different customs will misunderstand each other.(丛鑫港)Para 2：For example, in the USA, we can call his or her name when we first meet, which is seen as very impolite in China.(蔡海翔)In America, people can call others name when they meet for the first time. But it is considered impolite in China.(李子豪)For example, people who live in the USA are allowed to call others name even if they meet for the first time. However, it is considered rude and impolite in China. (顾徐淑)Para 3：Whats more, in China, we can also ask how much the clothes cost or even womens age, and the person who is asked never feels unhappy. (蔡海翔)In China, if you ask someone how much his or her clothes cost or you ask a woman how old she is, they wont care a lot.(丛鑫港) Also, people dont care if others ask how much his or her coat is, and asking the age of a woman is also considered normal than impolite in China.(顾徐淑)But these topics should be avoided in America.(符玉婷)But in America, we should avoid asking these questions.(张晓初)But if you are in the USA, youd better avoid these topics.(杨雪苏)Para 4：From my point of view, we should respect different cultures. And when we come to other countries, what we should do first is to get accustomed to the differences and do as what the local people do.(夏添)I think we should learn more about other countries cultures, which is a good way to understand more about each other.(陈淑玉)In my opinion, we should follow their customs in other countries. (汪涛)In my opinion, it is common that people have different customs. And we should remember that something we consider common may seem strange to others. (丛鑫港)In my opinion, we must learn more about cultural differences. Otherwise, we will have difficulty in communicating with foreigners.(孟伟伦) This is a good way to improve the relationship among people from different countries.(郑宇)Its necessary for you to know the customs in the place where you want to travel and try to accept them.(周慧钰)If we break the taboos in some places, we may be caught in trouble, so we must learn more about the cultural differences. (符磊磊)In this case, we can live in harmony with each other. (顾徐淑) Social customs differ in different parts of the world. If we dont realize this, misunderstandings may arise between people that behave differently . For example, American call each other by given names when two people first meet, while in China, it is regarded quite impolite to do so. Another difference is about what can be talked about in a conversation. A Chinese thinks nothing of being asked how much his coat costs while Americans think it impolite to ask such a question. A Chinese woman doesnt care if she is asked about her age, income and so on. But in the United States these kinds of subjects are usually avoided in a conversation. Since there are many different social customs among different countries, the way that we behave and what we talk about require our attention. If we keep these in mind, we will do it better and understand each other better. Since there are many different social customs among different countries, the way that we behave and what we talk about require our attention. If we keep these in mind, we will do it better and understand each other better.