高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、求助信：提升英语写作水平湖南省长沙市长郡中学2024-2025学年高一上学期11月期中考试假定你是高中生李华，在最近几次英语考试中，你的写作部分得分较低。请给你的英国笔友Jim写一封邮件，寻求他的帮助。内容包括：1.自己的困难或困惑；2.希望得到帮助。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段指出自己的困难或困惑（要点1）；第二段希望得到帮助（要点2）；第三段期待回复。【参考范文】Dear Jim,I hope this email finds you well! Recently, I have encountered great challenges with my writing in the English exams, which has given me poor scores and left me quite perplexed. Despite my extensive reading and practice, I am still struggling to identify effective strategies for improvement.Your exceptional English proficiency and the excellent writing skills have impressed me a lot. Would you be so kind as to share some techniques or advice on enhancing English writing? I sincerely hope to receive your guidance in developing my writing abilities.Looking forward to your favorble reply! (95 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的吉姆：见信好！最近几次英语考试，我的写作部分得分都不太理想，这让我非常困惑。我尝试过多阅读、多练习，但似乎没有找到提高的有效方法。我知道你的英语非常棒，写作也很出色。不知道你是否能分享一些英语写作的技巧或者给我一些建议？我非常希望能得到你的帮助，让我的英语写作能力有所提高。期待你的回复！李华 【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为求助信；（2）因两人是笔友关系，故李华的身份不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分为介绍个人困难并发起求助，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。02本文亮点（1）I hope this email finds you well运用无灵主语结构；（2）left me quite perplexed让我很困惑；（3）despite介词，尽管；（4）struggling to identify effective strategies寻找有效策略一直很艰难；（5）. impressed me a lot给我留下深刻印象；（6）Would you be so kind as to do sth=Would you be so kind that you could do sth。二、建议信：开发多功能智慧屏台州市2024年11月高三一模你所在的国际学校在教室门口安装一款多功能智慧屏，现向学生征集建议。假定你是李华，请你给负责人Mr. Hall写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1.建议开发的功能；2.说明理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在大提质的相应位置作答。Dear Mr. Hall,Im Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 3.Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段交代写作目的提出建议；第二段写建议开发的内容（要点1）并说明理由（要点2）；第三段表达期待。【参考范文】Dear Mr. Hall,Im Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 3. I would like to offer some advice regarding the newly installed multifunctional smart screen in our school. To begin with, I believe it would be beneficial to create a function to showcase class schedules, which makes it easier for us to get a days course arrangements as well as room shifts. Also, it would be advisable to add a scrolling bulletin board to guarantee that important messages are swiftly conveyed to all students. Furthermore, equipping the smart screen with weather forecasts and time reminders would greatly facilitate our daily study routines and personal schedules.I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account. Thank you! (108 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的霍尔老师：我是来自三年级三班的李华。我想就学校新安装的多功能智慧屏提一些建议。我认为可以开发课程信息显示功能，这样学生可以一目了然地看到当天的课程安排和教室变动。另外，建议增加通知公告滚动播放，确保重要信息能及时传达给每位学生。还有，如果智慧屏能具备天气预报和时间提醒功能，将更有助于我们的日常学习和生活安排。期待您的考虑，谢谢！李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）原文本已给出身份，故李华的身份不必重复交代；（3）因文体主体部分为提出智慧屏开发新功能的建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。02本文亮点（1）regarding介词，关于；（2）to begin with首先；（3）showcase展示；（4）which makes it easier for us to .使得我们做某事变得容易；（5）as well as=not only . but also .；（6）it would be advisable to do sth做某事是明智之选；（7）Furthermore此外；（8）equip . with .配备；（9）facilitate使.便利；（10）I would appreciate it if you could take . into account如果你能把.考虑在内我将不胜感激。三、分享信：参观市科技馆浙江G5联盟2024学年第一学期高二年级期中联考假定你是李华，上周五你参观了市科技馆(Science Museum)，请你写一封邮件给爱尔兰朋友Ryan，内容包括：1.你的经历；2.你的感想。注意：1.写作词数应为 80 个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Dear Ryan,Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段交代写作目的分享参观市科技馆活动；第二段分享参观经历（要点1）；第三段写参观的感受（要点2）。【参考范文】Dear Ryan,I hope this email finds you well. Last Friday witnessed my visit to the City Science Museum, which Id like share with you.Upon entering the exhibition hall, I was captivated by a wide range of high-tech exhibits. I gave virtual reality glasses a try and felt as though I had been transported to a magical underwater world. Additionally, I explored the robot exhibition section and was amazed by the sight of the AI robots capable of dancing, drawing, and even engaging in simple conversations. What an eye-opening experience it is to learn through fun!The journey has deeply impressed me with the charm and boundless possibilities of science. I hope there will be a time in the future when we can embark on a journey to discover more wonders together.Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的瑞恩：见信好！上周五，我参观了市科技馆，并想和你分享一下此次经历。一进展厅，我就被各种高科技展品深深吸引。我尝试了虚拟现实眼镜，体验了仿佛置身海底世界的奇妙感觉；还参观了机器人展区，看到了能够跳舞、画画甚至进行简单对话的智能机器人，真是大开眼界！这次参观让我深刻感受到了科技的魅力和无限可能。希望未来有机会能和你一起探索更多科技的奥秘。李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为分享信；（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分为介绍参观市科技馆的经历及其感悟，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。02本文亮点（1）I hope this email finds you well运用无灵主语结构；（2）Last Friday witnessed运用无灵主语结构；（3）Upon entering=When I arrived at .；（4）a wide range of各种各样的；（5）give sth a try尝试；（6）additionally此外；（7）capable of在句中用作后置定语，有能力做某事；（8）engaging in从事，参与，进行；（9）learn through fun寓教于乐；（10）impressed me with给我留下深刻印象；（11）embark on开始。 4