单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,2024/11/18,#,2024,学年杭州市一模,应用文,假定你是李华，上学期你校发起了一项活动，倡议每个班级都养绿植（,greenery,）。请你给曾经的外教,Linda,写一封邮件介绍相关情况，内容包括：,1,活动内容；,2,活动的效果和反响；,water consistently and adequately,provide adequate sunlight,apply fertilizer for nourishment,maintain optimal humidity levels,monitor for pests and diseases,adjust care based on seasons,document growth progress,与养护绿植具体步骤有关,定期而充足地浇水,提供充足的阳光,施肥以补充营养,保持最佳湿度水平,监测虫害和疾病,根据季节调整护理,记录生长进展,与养护绿植好处及意义有关,创造一个更绿色的校园环境,提供实践学习的机会,培养责任感,鼓励团队合作与协作,增强对生物学和生态系统的理解,发展耐心和承诺,培养对自然的热爱,增强环境意识,促进社交互动和沟通,让学生参与体验式学习,create a greener school environment,provide hands-on learning experiences,foster a sense of responsibility,encourage teamwork and collaboration,enhance understanding of biology and ecosystems,develop patience and commitment,cultivate a love for nature,enhance environmental awareness,facilitate social interaction and communication,engage students in experiential learning,与养护绿植好处及意义有关,四,试题写作,Para1:,开头,1,问候增加交际性,希望你最近过的很好！,I hope this email finds you well!,2,开门见山表明写作目的,我写这封邮件是为了分享我们学校上学期启动的一项令人兴奋的活动：通过培养植物来倡导绿化。,I am writing to share an exciting initiative,that our school launched last semester:adopting greenery by nurturing plants.,3,添加目的,、后置定语等,丰富细节,To create a greener school environment,（目的）,our school launched an initiative,encouraging each class to adopt greenery by nurturing plants,（后置定语）,.,Para2:,正文,思考：活动内容可以写哪些,?,select a plant,take care of the plant,hold an exhibition,策略：,1.,使用连接词,/,句链接活动。,First,，,It was also worth mentioning that.,Besides that,.,策略：,2.,使用定语从句,/,非谓语等高分句型润色句子。,首先，每个班级被要求选择一种植物，在整个学期内进行照顾。值得一提的是，我们承担了从浇水、施肥到监测生长等各种责任，这不仅促进了团队合作，还培养了责任感。此外，我们在学期末组织了一场小型展览，展示我们的植物并分享我们的经验。,First,each class was tasked with selecting a type of plant to care for throughout the semester.,It was also worth mentioning that,we took on various responsibilities from watering and fertilizing to monitoring growth,which not only promoted teamwork but also instilled a sense of responsibility,（定语从句）,.,Besides that,we organized a small exhibition at the end of the semester,，,allowing us to showcase our plants and share our experiences,（非谓语）,.,Para3:,结尾,1.,效果句型：,Overall,sth was adj and adj.,Overall,sth turned out to be a huge success.,Overall,sth was well received and enjoyed great popularity,among students.,2.,反响句型：,Not only,but also,In addition to,sth.,策略：,1.,使用总分结构评价效果与反响。,2.,使用高分动词增色句子。,总体而言，这项活动既有趣又富有意义。它不仅创造了一个更生动健康的环境，还增强了我们对自然的欣赏。,（总）,Overall,the initiative was fun and more than fun.,（分）,Not only did it,create a more vibrant and healthy environment,but it also,fostered a greater appreciation for nature,among us.,Dear Linda,I hope this email finds you well!I am writing to share an exciting initiative that our school launched last semester:adopting greenery by nurturing plants.,First,each class was tasked with selecting a type of plant to care for throughout the semester.It was also worth mentioning that we took on various responsibilities from watering and fertilizing to monitoring growth,which not only promoted teamwork but also instilled a sense of responsibility.Besides that,we organized a small exhibition at the end of the semester,allowing,us,to showcase our plants and shared our experiences.,Overall,the initiative was fun and more than fun.Not only did it create a more vibrant and healthy environment,but it also fostered a greater appreciation for nature among us.I would love to hear your thoughts on such activities.Looking forward to hearing from you!,Li Hua,Dear Linda,Hope this letter finds you well.To,inject/instill a touch of vitality/green into class,an,initiative,called Greenery in Every Classroom was,launched,receiving,overwhelmingly positive feedback.(,为了给班级注入一丝活力与绿色,我们发起了一项名为绿植进校园的活动,收到了人们积极的反馈,),This,event kicked off as scheduled,with,each class,selecting,their beloved plants like succulents and ivy.(,本次活动如期开始,每个班级都选择了他们心爱的植物,如多肉植物和常春藤,),To,acquaint us with,relevant knowledge,botanical seminar/workshop,was held,in which,experts showed us,maintenance techniques,growth habits of plants and light requirements,.,(,为了让我们熟悉相关知识,我们举办了植物学研讨会,/,讲习班,专家们向我们展示了植物的养护技术,植物的生长习性和光照要求,),Then the students were divided into various groups,each of which,was responsible for,a few pots of plants,including,watering,fertilizing,pruning,and pest control,.,(,然后学生们被分成不同小组,每个小组负责几盆植物,包括浇水,施肥,修剪和害虫防治,),Also of primary note was,the plant exhibition showcasing our,hard-earned achievements,.(,同样值得一提的是植物展览,展示了我们来之不易的成就,),Not only did this event transform our spaces into,vibrant areas,but it also,fostered our sense of community and teamwork.,I would love to hear your thoughts on such activities.,Li Hua,