单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,2024/12/17,#,高考英语,读后续写语篇,练习,妈妈的节俭与“稻草人诞生记”,1,题目分析,读后续写,题目再现,范文呈现,努力方向,2,Part 1,题目呈现,3,续写原文,My mother believed in using things up.Last year,our cornfield had a bad harvest because birds feasted on the crops.It was probably then that Moms frugality(,节俭,)became even more extraordinary.She began keeping everything that seemed useless in the attic(,阁楼,)worn-out clothes,old sheets,broken umbrellas,and some other old items.Moms favorite saying was“waste not,want not”(,俭以防匮,).My brother Josh and I werent sure what that meant until the“Affair of the Scarecrow(,稻草人,)”,which,as it later became known,left a lasting impression on us.,The story began with a pretty hat that Mom received as a gift to protect her from the sun.However,Josh and I could see that Moms frugal nature and fashion sense were in battle.Mom really didnt want to get rid of the hatit was new and had a lot of use left in itbut neither could she stand wearing it.She tried to take off the fancy decorations,but they were stuck on tight.Shed have to find some other solution.,4,续写原文,Josh and I watched as Mom headed upstairs to the attic with the hat.“Waste not,want not,”she called back down.We heard boxes being moved around.Moments later,Mom leaned out,holding a flour bag full of straw,and with a mysterious smile,she placed the hat on it.,“What is that for?”I asked,confused.“A scarecrow!”Mom exclaimed.“But not a good one yet.It needs a strong body to stand firm in the field,”she said with a frown.“And it doesnt look scary enough,”Josh remarked.I had to admit that Josh,though younger than I was,could sometimes be more imaginative.Josh and I turned to each other,searching for a good idea.Soon enough,Joshs eyes lit up with inspiration.,5,段首句,Paragraph 1:“Come with me!”Josh called out.,Paragraph 2:In the following days,the scarecrow stood proudly.,6,Part 2,题目分析,7,续写原文分析,8,文中讲述了妈妈秉持着物尽其用的节俭理念，在经历玉米欠收后愈发如此，将各类看似无用之物收纳于阁楼。当获赠一顶漂亮却不实用的帽子时，妈妈纠结后决定不浪费，拿着它去阁楼并带回装满稻草的面粉袋，打算制作稻草人。“我”和弟弟乔什看到后，虽觉得不太像样，但乔什更具想象力，这引起了我们的兴趣，也让我们对妈妈的行为有了新的认识。妈妈的“废物利用”不仅是一种生活习惯，更在不经意间为平淡的生活增添了独特的色彩，也让孩子们在这个过程中感受到节俭与创造的奇妙融合，给他们留下深刻印象。,点,1,：位于,续写第一段段首,，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；,点,2,：位于,续写第一段段尾,，流畅衔接第二段段首句；,点,3,：位于,续写第二段段首,，续写衔接第二段段首语；,点,4,：,文章结尾升华,，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。,情节构建的重点,9,续写思路分析,Paragraph 1:“Come with me!”Josh called out.,“,Come with me!”Josh called out.,我满心好奇地跟在乔什身后，只见他一路小跑着冲向杂物间。他的眼神中闪烁着兴奋的光芒，一边跑一边回头催促我快些。进入杂物间后，乔什在一堆旧物中翻找起来，不一会儿，他抽出了两根细长的木棍和一件破旧的黑色大衣。他笑着对我说：“用这些给稻草人做个身子，肯定很棒！”说着，便拉着我往回跑。回到院子里，乔什开始动手组装，他将木棍交叉固定，做成骨架，然后把大衣套在上面，还时不时地调整着位置，嘴里念念有词，仿佛在进行一场神圣的仪式，不一会儿，一个初具雏形的稻草人身体就完成了。,10,续写思路分析,Paragraph 2:In the following days,the scarecrow stood proudly.,In the following days,the scarecrow stood proudly.,它身着那件有些破旧却被整理得整齐的黑色大衣，稳稳地立在玉米地中。两根木棍支撑着的身体笔直而坚定，头上那顶原本花哨的帽子此刻也显得格外合适。微风拂过，稻草人的衣袖轻轻飘动，竟真有了几分威严的气势，仿佛一位忠诚的卫士守护着这片田地。过往的鸟儿们看到它，都不敢再轻易靠近，只是在远处盘旋几圈后便飞走了。妈妈看着稻草人，脸上露出了欣慰的笑容，嘴里念叨着“,waste not,want not”,，而我和乔什则在一旁，为自己的杰作感到无比自豪，这个稻草人不仅守护了庄稼，也成为了我们家节俭与智慧的象征，见证着那段充满趣味的时光。,11,Part 3,范文呈现,12,范文呈现,“Come with me!”Josh called out.His eyes were sparkling with excitement as he dashed towards the shed.I followed him curiously.Once inside,he rummaged through the piles of old stuff and soon pulled out two long and thin wooden sticks and a worn-out black coat.“These will make a great body for the scarecrow!”he exclaimed with a grin,and then dragged me back to the yard.Josh got down to work assembling the scarecrow.He crossed and fastened the wooden sticks to form a framework and then carefully draped the coat over it,adjusting the position from time to time and muttering to himself as if performing a sacred ritual.Before long,the rudimentary body of the scarecrow was taking shape.,13,范文呈现,In the following days,the scarecrow stood proudly.Dressed in the somewhat tattered but neatly arranged black coat,it stood firmly in the cornfield.The body supported by the two wooden sticks was straight and resolute,and the once fancy hat on its head now seemed particularly apt.As the gentle breeze blew,the sleeves of the scarecrow fluttered slightly,giving it an air of dignity.It was like a loyal guardian watching over the field.The birds that used to feast on the crops dared not approach easily anymore.They just circled a few times in the distance and then flew away.Mom looked at the scarecrow and smiled with satisfaction,murmuring“waste not,want not”.Meanwhile,Josh and I stood beside it,feeling extremely proud of our masterpiece.This scarecrow not only protected the crops but also became a symbol of our familys frugality and wisdom,bearing witness to that interesting and memorable time.,14,升级版范文呈现,“Come with me!”Josh called out,his eyes ablaze with enthusiasm as he sprinted towards the shed.I trailed behind,intrigued.Once there,he,dug,through the jumble of old items and triumphantly retrieved two slender wooden rods and a threadbare black coat.“These,without a doubt,will construct a remarkable body for our scarecrow!”he declared.,Back in the yard,Josh commenced the assembly.With deft hands,he crossed